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girlfan1979
2008-04-10
ch 6, anon.
abusePretty neat story, with some genuinely interesting OCs!

Thanks for sharing.
MDarKspIrIt
2008-02-28
ch 6,
abuseIt was an awesome story...It's sad it's already finished though!
Hope you'll write another one soon!
rozzy07
2008-02-28
ch 6,
abuseWell here's hoping your enjoying the the Dolte Vita in Italy! Seriously I sat down and read this story in the wee hours this morning and got totally caught up in it. Great story telling coupled with your own OCs that really just added so wonderfully to the mix. Tressa especially was a great addition, and it would be interesting to see her interaction with the Winchesters in later years, esp' with what she fears for the future of our young Sam and his dad's perceptions of the world his family inhabits. Enjoy your break, and yes I will be looking forward to your next story with interest.
jenilee
2008-02-28
ch 6,
abuseGlad Tressy at least will be able to walk.
Loved how you tied all this to explain why John could've kept the boys away from the other hunters and also how he could have found out about Sam and his role in everything.
Great story.
Sam666
2008-02-28
ch 6,
abuseGreat Storym I loved that this is the reason that Sam and Dean did not know that mnay hunters or about Harvelles.
jenilee
2008-02-16
ch 5,
abuseGreat chapter.
Oh Teresa, dang I hope they can help her. She's a great character and would love to see more of her.
"Sam had gone rigid again, eyes locked with the demon, not uttering any sound."- Poor Sammy, his not making any sounds was even scarier than when he was screaming.
Like how Dean and Sam were kids and acted like kids for the most part, crying and scared but also they showed the sparks of their current personalities and John's training by doing what needed to be done, by helping with the water and the salt lines. Hope that made sense.
Sam666
2008-02-12
ch 5,
abuseGlad that Sam and Dean are okay, I liked this story, and from watching Supernatural I noticed that Sam and Dean had very little contact with other hunters growing up, just Caleb and Jim really, i can not see why.
Write-of-Passage
2008-02-11
ch 5,
abuseThat was so cool! Really well written action. There was so much going on but you wrote it so well that is was all clear and easy to follow. Very exciting! I was glued to the screen. Tress is AWESOME! Love her character. Please update soon! Though that last chapter was very worth the wait. Really good job!
Kika =P
2008-02-11
ch 5, anon.
abuseoh. emm. gee! i cant believe that happened! i cant wait for the next chapter, this story is so susoenseful. cant wait to see if they find out about Samy or not! plz update soon!

Erika =P
rhianastar
2008-02-11
ch 5, anon.
abuseWow... had me on pins and needles... Sammy crying out when the demon looked into his eyes... Will there be repercussions from what Tim said to John. And Tres what does she know...

very very good update... worth the wait
camlann
2008-02-11
ch 5,
abusePoor Teresa--she's definitely made quite the sacrifice in order to save the boys. Nice gal, definitely. And way to go, John, for shooting Tim! Nice shots! Anyways, looking forward to the next chapter, so update again soon!

camlann :)
Nilah
2008-02-04
ch 4,
abuseThis story is great. Can’t answer your question about the Weechesters because we haven’t gotten enough of them yet for me to make a determination, but John is right on. Like the John / Teresa tension. Italy? Lucky you. Enjoy yourself! Looking forward to the next chapter.
Sam666
2008-01-28
ch 4,
abuseOh wow, Teresa looked into Mary's Death. can't wait to see what happens next
mikiss
2008-01-27
ch 4,
abuseJust found this one. Great start and while I know you will have fun in Italy, don't forget your faithful readers! I'm envious, by the way.
dreamgirl93
2008-01-27
ch 4,
abuseoh no! I hope the kids make it at least!
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