 FreaksLikeUS 2009-12-04 . chapter 1Wow it would be so funny to see Bumblebee in a tracksuit..if you could even get him into one. It would have to be quite large..It was funny when Optimus was confused about Sam's expressions, lol. You should write more chapters to this! Remember! I am hiding underneath your floorboards watching...always watching..you really need to dust under here. |
 fullmoonhowls 2009-11-22 . chapter 1Hehe..poor Sam...wants to bang his head on a pole hehe..Awesome one shot..loved it! |
 noctaval 2009-10-10 . chapter 1Aw. This is cute. It's great how Sam is intimidated by the Autobots' awesomeness...and they really suck at "inconspicuous." |
 Kaede Akira 2009-10-08 . chapter 1Lol! This was cute! You capture Sam well and his reactions to Optimus are totally believable! Nice! |
 lakuniko 2009-10-05 . chapter 1It not even humour story but I laugh out lound for many secene in this fic. this is very great. please write more about Sam and other bot. ^_^ |
 MarHeavenAngel 2009-09-23 . chapter 1“I don’t really need anything,” Sam said. “I’ve got a car – kind of – and a girlfriend. I’m a simple guy; that’s all I need. Just call me Sam ‘Simple’ Witwicky.”
The look of confusion returned.
“I thought your middle name was ‘James.’”
ha-ha-ha-ha! how we love you optimus! XD |
 LeLa London 2009-09-20 . chapter 1funny. sam's so in character by being awkward and nervous. |
 LCM DoePatronus 2009-08-09 . chapter 1Cute! And awkward, especially for Sam. I love it. Are you going to continue or is this a one-shot? |
 Please Note 2009-07-04 . chapter 1An Cailin Rua, your second reviewer, summed my feelings up to a hilt.
I could actually picture something like this happening. What a gauche situation all around. Sam’s discomfort at Prime’s visage and subsequent clarification to his questions were sound and in-character. Assuming Prime, Ironhide, and Ratchet partially went their separate ways after the Movie’s events, Sam clearly wouldn’t be entirely comfortable with spending a great or unexpected length of time with them.
Ha! Bumblebee’s transformation and line were rather amusing as well. Optimus and Bee certainly seem to have gotten a bit too comfortable in their Earthly setting. |
 dragonwitch250 2009-07-02 . chapter 1This is nice. Great job! |
 PenPatronus 2009-06-29 . chapter 1Ah ha! Finally someone on this site who portrays Sam's squirrel-y awkwardness! Good characterization, cute scene. |
 Starkreactor 2009-06-24 . chapter 1Thankfully, he was not wearing a giant tracksuit. Seeing Optimus in his normal form, Bumblebee transformed as well, and it was all Sam could do to keep from beating his head on the lamp-post.
Aww, very cute ^^ |
 KnucklesRedFury207.2 2009-06-02 . chapter 1Oh I thought this was CUTE! I could even see a sequel to this!!~ |
 optimus prime girl 2008-12-27 . chapter 1LoL!! ^_^ That was funny! Sam was really confusing Optimus with the change of middle names! ^_^ |
 Jessie07 2008-05-16 . chapter 1great story!! Are you going to continue it? It would be awesome if you did!! Anyway, keep up the great work! |