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FreaksLikeUS
2009-12-04 . chapter 1
Wow it would be so funny to see Bumblebee in a tracksuit..if you could even get him into one. It would have to be quite large..It was funny when Optimus was confused about Sam's expressions, lol. You should write more chapters to this! Remember! I am hiding underneath your floorboards watching...always watching..you really need to dust under here.
fullmoonhowls
2009-11-22 . chapter 1
Hehe..poor Sam...wants to bang his head on a pole hehe..Awesome one shot..loved it!
noctaval
2009-10-10 . chapter 1
Aw. This is cute. It's great how Sam is intimidated by the Autobots' awesomeness...and they really suck at "inconspicuous."
Kaede Akira
2009-10-08 . chapter 1
Lol! This was cute! You capture Sam well and his reactions to Optimus are totally believable! Nice!
lakuniko
2009-10-05 . chapter 1
It not even humour story but I laugh out lound for many secene in this fic. this is very great. please write more about Sam and other bot. ^_^
MarHeavenAngel
2009-09-23 . chapter 1
“I don’t really need anything,” Sam said. “I’ve got a car – kind of – and a girlfriend. I’m a simple guy; that’s all I need. Just call me Sam ‘Simple’ Witwicky.”

The look of confusion returned.

“I thought your middle name was ‘James.’”

ha-ha-ha-ha! how we love you optimus! XD
LeLa London
2009-09-20 . chapter 1
funny. sam's so in character by being awkward and nervous.
LCM DoePatronus
2009-08-09 . chapter 1
Cute! And awkward, especially for Sam. I love it. Are you going to continue or is this a one-shot?
Please Note
2009-07-04 . chapter 1
An Cailin Rua, your second reviewer, summed my feelings up to a hilt.

I could actually picture something like this happening. What a gauche situation all around. Sam’s discomfort at Prime’s visage and subsequent clarification to his questions were sound and in-character. Assuming Prime, Ironhide, and Ratchet partially went their separate ways after the Movie’s events, Sam clearly wouldn’t be entirely comfortable with spending a great or unexpected length of time with them.

Ha! Bumblebee’s transformation and line were rather amusing as well. Optimus and Bee certainly seem to have gotten a bit too comfortable in their Earthly setting.
dragonwitch250
2009-07-02 . chapter 1
This is nice. Great job!
PenPatronus
2009-06-29 . chapter 1
Ah ha! Finally someone on this site who portrays Sam's squirrel-y awkwardness! Good characterization, cute scene.
Starkreactor
2009-06-24 . chapter 1
Thankfully, he was not wearing a giant tracksuit. Seeing Optimus in his normal form, Bumblebee transformed as well, and it was all Sam could do to keep from beating his head on the lamp-post.

Aww, very cute ^^
KnucklesRedFury207.2
2009-06-02 . chapter 1
Oh I thought this was CUTE! I could even see a sequel to this!!~
optimus prime girl
2008-12-27 . chapter 1
LoL!! ^_^ That was funny! Sam was really confusing Optimus with the change of middle names! ^_^
Jessie07
2008-05-16 . chapter 1
great story!! Are you going to continue it? It would be awesome if you did!! Anyway, keep up the great work!
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