|Reviews for The Kiss and the Bites|
| Spikesagitta 1/24/08 . chapter 2
heh, nope, that wasnt what was going through my mind, honest! maybe a little :P
but damn this chapter is cute! nice one!
| Syaoran Li Clow 1/24/08 . chapter 2
I wasn’t one of them; I’m telling you the truth.
Anyway, I don’t blame Yumi at all for thinking dirty thoughts on that exact moment, especially being on that place for the record. Yoshiro stalking Rei is possible, more if you remember the First Season when Rei had a date (I don’t remember if it was for Valentine’s Day or White Day), Yoshiro was stalking her until she was discovered by the girl from the newspaper and Yumi. Yumi is so easy to tease, more if you know where and when to do it.
Thank you for the good time reading this chapter, it was worth it.
| Tsuma-chan 1/23/08 . chapter 2
Kissing ant bites... Sachiko? You know, I'm fairly disappointed about the missing S/M part... rofl.
Nah, It was sweet enough. I love your Yumi, she is just a perfect Yumi, Arigato.
I think I'll practice my ant kissing technique. You never know... sigh...
| kurakami 1/23/08 . chapter 1
Another great story! We've seen the kiss but not the bite. can't wait for the next part when tech allows.
| Sui-chan 1/23/08 . chapter 1
/o/ Will I read porn later? Yay
| Syaoran Li Clow 1/22/08 . chapter 1
I fought them every single day of my life at work, and still live with them at peace.
A shame we couldn’t have the chance to read chapter two already, the preview seems interesting, especially Yumi’s reaction to Sachiko’s words. She only stole a kiss, but now will have to pay for it. Nothing in this life is for free, especially a kiss from a dear one.
Hopefully your notebook will be alive soon. Greetings.
| Tsuma-chan 1/22/08 . chapter 1
Aw man! I can't belive I never once mentioned those dark eyelashes!
I liked this. And I can just see Yumi entering the Rose Mansion in a world of her own, Sachiko and Rei staring at her. Classic Yumi, I loved it.
So sweet with Yumi braving all and kissing her cheek... sigh... simply adorable.
But what the hell is this with next chapter! Are you planning some kind of S/M seance with my sweet Yumi, you pervert! Give me that damn laptop and I'll...
| piglets 1/22/08 . chapter 1
the story is very interesting can you please add on chapter 2 i really want to know what happen
| Spikesagitta 1/22/08 . chapter 1
nice! and you better get to posting the next chapter, after that kind of cliffie and that very juicy preview of the next chapter...you cant leave it there or rather, i cant stop agonizing over it until you do :P