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Reviews For: Don't Hate Me Because I'm Beautiful - Reviews: Page 1 of 5

choc-strawberry
2008-08-02
ch 17,
abusei love your story!
supersaiyanx
2008-07-20
ch 17,
abuseA great chapter- hope that you will update soon.
alice and edward cullen
2008-07-20
ch 17,
abuseaw please update, i know life ca be busy but this always makes my day that bit brighter!!
Isebella
2008-07-19
ch 17,
abuseWOW! Love this story, I found it this morning and just kept reading, with a few stops here and there. Anyway, I love your characters, I think Collins is a little overdone but, there are people out there that are like that (my brother) so not unrealistic.

I also don't think in the book the Lizzy was attracted to Darcy at all, until after reading his letter and thus putting him in a good light, but hey this is a fanfiction for a reason right?

Your style is light and humorous but doesn't skip/skim over deeper matters I like that a lot.

(you'll have to excuse the fact that I can't spell at all, I read a lot and practise a lot but I just am not any better in my spelling. Sorry)

I love Marshall's character perfect, humor great and no serious attachment.

Now your probley getting tired of this review =) so I'll Zip the Lip or fingers in this case and say Toddels!
Off Dreaming
2008-07-19
ch 17,
abusetoday i have come to appreciate the amazingness of lizzy. how she manages to say the things she does with a semi-straight face is beyond me.
my favorite line has to be:
"She called Will over and began detailing Anne’s various recent medical issues - most of them a bad case of hypochondria, albeit of the mother for the daughter..."
hilarious and well-done!
i'm sorry about your laptop. i live in california and there are lots of fires going on. there was an article in the newspaper today titled "what would you save [if your house was on fire]?" and immediately i thought i would have to save a USB of all my writing because i would just die without it.
anyway, i hope you update soon!
IcelandGirl812
2008-07-19
ch 17,
abuseAw, thanks! =D I still think this deserves more reviews! It's excellent!! I'm so sorry about Manny (haha, I name inanimate objects too! My laptop's name is Al...) and the lost 6 pages! That sucks! I'm glad to know you know where you want to go next! =D
IcelandGirl812
2008-07-18
ch 16,
abuseI love that you made Anne not this little shell of a person that never talks. That's a refreshing thing I haven't read before. I'm also happy to notice you just added another chapter!! =D Yay yay yay!! =D
IcelandGirl812
2008-07-18
ch 11,
abuseI hate what has to happen in this chapter, but I don't hate the chapter itself. Every time I read this part of any P&P story I just want to scream at Lizzy for believing it all! Even though I know, if I was in her shoes, I would have believed it too. Ok, gonna go read more! =D
IcelandGirl812
2008-07-18
ch 8,
abuseI like you making Collins a pervert! You're right, that's exactly what he is! Plus slimy and creepy! The whole cousin thing is *shudders* blugth! Yuck! No matter how distant cousins they are, it's disgusting! On a much better note, I love this so far!! I find it really funny that Caroline is 21 and still a high school senior! I'm sad and mad this only has 61-about to be 62-reviews. I think it's excellent and deserves more reviews!!
IcelandGirl812
2008-07-18
ch 1,
abuseI think I'm going to like this!! =D I always enjoy it when the book is mentioned! And I like that it's set in Australia. That's cool!
supersaiyanx
2008-05-17
ch 16,
abuseUpdate soon please- another great chapter!
Fergette
2008-05-14
ch 16,
abuseIf I didn't know better, I'd say Will has multipersonality disorder or something. Seriously, can the man not be consistent? Poor Lizzy, having Charli doll her up for stuck up Catty. Next time she should be her punky ** self and who the hell cares what the others think. ^^
choc-strawberry
2008-05-11
ch 16,
abuseHI. It's great. I like it!
Mrs John Thornton
2008-05-10
ch 15,
abuseGreat chapter, i love that fact that the Gardiners are young, it makes the relationship between Lizzie and them more realistic.

P.S I'm in Year 11 doing two year 12 subjects, so i totally understand where your coming from with the whole SACs and homework thing.
choc-strawberry
2008-05-08
ch 1,
abusecool
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