OMG! Luke is so... WAH!! I don't know!! poor Luke!! :((

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Great ideas, great story...
Now please update before I go insane!

Pardon for my language but wtf?!
Kratos is with the God Generals?! Is that why Cantabile said, "A resemblance..."?!
Because Lloyd looked like Kratos?! I did not see that twist coming!
Why didn't Kratos say anything to Lloyd? Certainly he would regonize his own son.
This story keeps getting more dramatic and better~ ^o^
~C.E.A.

Wow, those last few chapters were really intense.
But had good meaning and added a good splash of drama. ^^
I wonder how Luke's gonna pass himself as Asch. That would be really fun to watch~ ^^
And Lloyd's crude disguise definitely made his face look like Kratos.
Speaking Kratos, when he gonna appear?!
I'm just busting with the need to know! >_<
~C.E.A.

Wait a mintue!
Why did Cantabile say, "A resemblance..."?!
Has she met Kratos?! Does she know where he is?!
This story is addicting and so full of suspense! ^o^
~C.E.A.

Aw, good old Lloyd with idealism~ ^^
That was lol at the part when Lloyd unintentionally crushed Luke's pride.
I wonder how many times Luke has to explain to Lloyd about the lowering the land and Van's plan.
~C.E.A.

That was really poetic on how you made Luke and Cantabile think the same thoughts. ^^
And Cantabile attracted to Lloyd?! o_o That gives me disturbing thoughts...
Also Lloyd comes to Luke's rescue!! ^o^
Though Luke's really weakened now considering he's been inprisoned for who knows how long.
That's probably gonna cause some problems.
And of course would mention the dwarven vows. They're cliche but good guidelines. ^^
Also at the end of the chapter, Lloyd reading a book?!
Has Raine smacked Lloyd so much that he's reading?!
Anyway, exciting chapter~ ^-^
~C.E.A.

Omg!! This is the most amazing crossover ever!
I just love crossovers with other Tales of games! ^o^
The plot and drama really describes Luke's feelings about being a replica and his guilt about Akzeriuth.
Also who this Cantabile? I heard of her in Tales of Fandom but what her role here?
And yay! Lloyd has finally made his entrance!
But Kratos is also in Auldrant! Where could he be?
This story is going straight into my top 5 favs! ^o^
Good luck~ ^^
~C.E.A

Hmm, this is a very interesting story. Usually I don't pay attention to crossover fics. But the Tales series seems to be one where I actually kind of crave a good crossover (don't ask why, I'm not sure of it myself. Then again maybe the fault lies with Tales of fandom?) and this was a good find. I like seeing Lloyd and Luke here and how they kind of affect each other and I'm very interested in how Lloyd will react to certain future events (that is if you decide to keep them here), such as the tower of Rem for example as well as how Luke's group (or just Luke) will react to some of Lloyd's many delightful little secrets. I'm not sure if I agree with all the characterizations, but none were so OOC and a lot of times different interpretations that's what can make reading a fic fun since it makes you also think about how they would react in that situation more.

The only real thing I worry about is if Luke get's overshadowed by Lloyd in certain events (well he is the main hero still right?). But it's nothing to big.

Anyway on to the chapter review. Guy took the shine in this chapter for me. I really like how you had him react the way he did to Lloyd's wings. It really makes sense in a way for him to react the way he did considering he of all people should know how capable people are when playing the believable eager best friend for their own purposes. Guy is a really good person and caring friend, but he's also seen more evil since so young that it's tough to be able to knock off feelings like that. Plus this is Luke here, Guy did pretty much raise him so (as long as no fontechnology is around XD) it's not hard to imagine Luke being on the surface of his thoughts like this. Oh and, Lloyd's apparently half bird to the regular abyss eyes.

OMG KRATOS DOESN'T REMEMBER! OH NO! I kinda thought Kratos would help them and all but...but...he lost his MEMORIES!! NO *continues screaming*
okay, I'll stop...
but seriously, why Kratos D': D': D':
okay NEXT CHAPTER

I'm really enjoying this story! I'm excited that Zelos showed up; I hope he interacts with the party more later on. And are those Guy/Luke vibes I'm getting ...? :3 (Even if it's just one-sided, that's better than nothing~)

Thanks for writing such a wonderful story! I can't wait to read more!

n.n It's just like Lloyd to wonder about fonons...he seems always to start wondering about things that seem stupid but are actually very insightful. (Wink) Nice job :D I like! n.n And sorry I didn't review sooner...n.n'

operation stalk Ash all over Aulderant!
You're right, it is fun.

The 'cheating' at the start of the chapter, that was rather amusing, and a good display of their relationship. No more 'ZOMG! WINGS!'

What I really like here is that Van's Sword was kept in Luke's room instead of the Absorption Gate(or was it the Radiation Gate? Its been a while). being stolen from there has more sever implications and is a much greater opportunity for emotional tension.
Nice job with the comparison of other swords BTW

Zelos, the only thing more mysterious than how did he get here, is why he is here.
ROFL!
Oh the dramatic Irony! Luke's racking his brain trying to figure Zelos's heritage out, but he's missing a very important fact.