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Reviews For: The Writer

beaujolais 2008-02-11 ch 5,	abuseThe ending might have given you trouble but you managed to wrap everything up nicely. Melanie wasn't so annoying after all and Jim and Sofia get a little closer.
Rebecca 2008-02-11 ch 5, anon.	abuseI love how you wrapped this up with him working her case when she was younger! Wonderful way to end the story.
Rebecca 2008-02-06 ch 4, anon.	abuseGlad Melanie saw the connection between him and Sofia. But glad that they all get along...for now. Also love the look back at a few cases they worked together. Maybe more cases to come? Look forward to reading more.
beaujolais 2008-02-05 ch 4,	abuseBringing Sofia into the mix was a nice little twist. Still curious about annoying writer lady - I keep thinking she's setting Jim up for something - but I do like how she's picked up on the vibes between Brass and Sofia.
Rebecca 2008-02-01 ch 3, anon.	abuseI didn't think you were going to make him put his life on the line for her! Just kidding. I loved it. Definately irritating enough. I loved the line at the end..."On the other, he was a hero...again." Just awesome. I would love to see her try to pry more stories about his past out though, and maybe he give in, just a little? Love what you have done so far, can't wait to read more.
beaujolais 2008-02-01 ch 3,	abuseBetween asking Jim about the shooting and wandering into a crime scene before it was cleared, yeah, I'd say she's definitely irritating. But I like it! I'm also curious as to why she picked Jim.
yanukjc 2008-02-01 ch 3,	abuseI LOVE the mystery and suspense. I can't wait to find out her reasons for picking Jim out for her article!
Rebecca 2008-01-30 ch 2, anon.	abuseSo far, so good. I would love for him to be continually annoyed with her. For once, I don't want to see him "get the girl" in this case. Maybe a friend, but nothing more. Just my thoughts. Can't wait for more.
yanukjc 2008-01-28 ch 2,	abuseI still like! heheh.. Seriously, I love Brass stories. And you have his character dead on. Especially when the dancer tried to stick her "assets" in his face and he totally ignored her!
beaujolais 2008-01-22 ch 1,	abuseNice start. I liked that Jim didn't like being saddled with her. As for suggestions, there are a lot of ways you can take this. Personally, I'd like to see Jim's annoyance with her overshadow any attraction he might have but whatever you decide, I'm sure it will be good.
yanukjc 2008-01-22 ch 1,	abuseYep, I like!!

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