Comfortable and... glowing. I really like this.

A word though - I think this piece would flow better if the first two "chapters" are placed right before the third, in the same document. The separation can be made with break-lines. It would jar less than having five-lines chapters.

But that's just my opinion. Good piece regardless :-)

oh wow this is so so beautiful it's a great story full of memories. A moving and graceful portrayal that shifts effortlessly from one point of view to another, while all the while exploring int feelings of a small girl. Long Live Marlene!!

Oh, these are realy beautiful pieces! I really like them a whole lot. I love the Shelke and Aerith ones the best, though they are all wonderful. I hope you will write some more of them!

I LOVE Marlene. My sisters and I all agree that she and Denzel are the coolest kids EVER! I think the Shelke chapter was my favorite (Vincent was in it, YAY!), but they're all awesome and I hope to see more of them soon. :)

I really like it a lot. Please update soon.

aww so cute! i really like this idea, its very unique