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| sarasvati's lazy maid 2008-03-09 ch 1, anon. | abusethat was awsome! how in the world did you come to the conclusion that it was crap? hell i couldn't remember much of the series but i do agree..Vash does need all the fluff the world could ever produce. |
| kyuubu no kituson 2008-02-26 ch 1, | abuseThat was great! |
| Jaythorne 2008-02-20 ch 1, | abuseOMG this was SO CUTE! Gosh I can't get enough Vash x Meryl fluff, but this was just ULTRA CUTE! Loved it! :D ~Jay~ (_() Marshmellow. |
| kialajaray 2008-02-05 ch 1, | abusethis was the 1st trigun fic ive read, and i think that its really good. ive always loved meryl and vash. millie and woodward (i think thats his name) 2 but he died so yeah. anyway good job. |
| catgirl26 (not signed in) 2008-01-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis was really cute. I liked it a lot. Good characterization and dialogue, and just the right amount of seriousness to balance out the fluff. |
| Babblefest 2008-01-22 ch 1, | abuseHappy Vash, oh how I've missed you. I sometimes forget about him because he gets buried under all of that angst. It's nice to see a bit of fluff. |
| pottachu 2008-01-22 ch 1, | abuseWow that was gorgeous! The words were PERFECT. I felt just like I was in Meryl's shoes and I couldn't stop smiling as I read it. The little details from the knife cutting her finger to the long heavy silence was everything needed to bring it to life. The story was perfectly formatted and everything seemed to be placed in just the right spot. I hope to read more from you. Geez, six years?? That's about how long it's been since I first met Trigun, but lucky for my readers on here, I didn't discover this website until several years later. Ha. Well, I haven't read your older stuff, but I bet you have improved a ton. Actually, this story inspires me to go rewrite one of my first Trigun pieces and post it on here. Vash's and Meryl's interactions were both beautiful and humorous, especially this: "You moron, you might be able to hold your breath for ten minutes, but I can't!" She yelled. Perfect. Thanks for the read! |
| Tigerrelly 2008-01-22 ch 1, | abuseAhh... so way too cute! I love it! Nicely done. :) |
| Songbird21 2008-01-22 ch 1, | abuseI liked it. It was very cute. Too bad you don't feel like continuing. |
| Griever5 2008-01-22 ch 1, | abuseAww! So sweet! |