Amazing story. Simply amazing. Your writing moves me. Beautiful!

Love, Ally

Very eloquent.

WOw great piece! I especially love the 'oh' 'oh''oh' bit! Lovely! :)

Loved the histories you created for Elizabeth and John as it seemed very plausible. Especially the one for Elizabeth, into how she developed into a diplomat. The last two parts were just so romantic. Sigh... quite well written. Thanks for sharing!

wow very well written, i liked it a lot! i loved how you described the characters, wrote their past, it fit them perfectly.

nice explanation on why the president called elizabeth :)

and i love the ending. straight to my favorites :)

I don't normally do reviews, but this is so very well written that I couldn't resist. Excellent work!

Wow - that was amazing. Wonderful slow build up to a highly-satisfactory, and thankfully unsappy, conclusion. You captured the essence of the characters beautifully. The back stories were completely believable and well-constructed too. I am looking forward to your next composition. Best, SALily