I really like this story. I particularly like the descriptions. The negotiations in this chapter were great too, particularly the end. The geographical details that show that this is Civilization, not the real world, are neat.

Holy crap this is very good so far :) . I hope you write more soon :D Also I found it a bit weird they havn't mentioned other countries outside of the war. Granted I don't know if you nly wan these four but it'd be nice to see India or the USA or maybe even the Japanese.

this is a great story. I would love to see more. But it seems you haven't updated in about a year. :( This is a very well written piece and very catchy.

HI

you should write more. I went and got an account

to tell you...

PLEASE WRITE MORE

This is one of the best stories I've ever read on fanfiction, and I have read alot, and you need to UPDATE,

seriously, the build up was great. Its like a classic ramantic comedy. Hurry and write more.

(By the way, that game rocks)