|Reviews for Betrothed to the Enemy|
| ChocolateTeapot 8/19/11 . chapter 2
I really like this story. I particularly like the descriptions. The negotiations in this chapter were great too, particularly the end. The geographical details that show that this is Civilization, not the real world, are neat.
| The Heir of Seth 5/4/10 . chapter 2
Holy crap this is very good so far :) . I hope you write more soon :D Also I found it a bit weird they havn't mentioned other countries outside of the war. Granted I don't know if you nly wan these four but it'd be nice to see India or the USA or maybe even the Japanese.
| kungfuwarrior 7/21/09 . chapter 2
this is a great story. I would love to see more. But it seems you haven't updated in about a year. :( This is a very well written piece and very catchy.
| Jaa the obsever 6/8/08 . chapter 1
you should write more. I went and got an account
to tell you...
PLEASE WRITE MORE
| master critique 6/1/08 . chapter 2
This is one of the best stories I've ever read on fanfiction, and I have read alot, and you need to UPDATE,
seriously, the build up was great. Its like a classic ramantic comedy. Hurry and write more.
(By the way, that game rocks)