This was so sweet and cute. I think you got both of them down pat. Very much in character for both. I'm still squeeing in delight. Thanks for sharing!

“Look, Shuichi. You’re not gay. Mizuki is a girl."

XD Haha, for some reason, that made me think of Gravitation... bah..

Regardless, cute story ^^ I really like it~*

aw cute! and i LOVED it. is it the end? i hope not.

hello...you make good fiction story huh...

but i like mizuki and nakatsu better than izumi...

hope you can make that one too


im CrAiEn...just new to ...

^_^

Very good and entirely possible I've always thought something like this was likely to happen boys being oh and girls too like they are and not made of stone. I've always thought if there was any more sex in Hana Kimi the books would spontaneously combust. lol I wouldn't mind not at all!!

Ah, very, very nicely written ;D
And it makes me think if Sano was that sort of person. *Ahem*
But I think you got their characters a little wrong.. ahh

aw!
that was absolutely lovely! I thoroughly enjoyed it!
Are you sure that was your first HK fanfic? It was very well written, and had good ideas for all of your concepts ^_^
I loved it. I hope you continue to write more hana-kimi fanfictions! (if you want to, you could make this into a popular non-oneshot.. but thats only if you want to ^_~ *wink wink, nudge nudge*)
lol, ja mata!
~Meiko =^-^=

:O!!
i REALLY liked it!
it was very sweet!

*squeals and flails about* hehe Aw that's so cute, although when I read the part about how his hand was up her shirt for reals my eyes went like O.O that's definitely one thing she can't talk herself out of