Well, asides from the grammar errors, this was okay except that the Yellows fly Su-37's not F-16's (you did set this in AC04, right?). Plus anything thing with the Yellow squad in it is good for me and I am also assuming that Jessie is Y4. Overall, okay job with some character depth in Jessie, just keep a lookout for grammar errors.

that was good, you first person stories i think are the best from now on. Consider doing some more; i seriously thought the guy would let Jessie live and they's end up together or something... that would have been messed up, but a real surprise for the story readers. i had no idea what F-22 meant but i figured it out! Great Job:)

hey this is a nice short story, but you should have checked for errors in it before you posted it. A number of spelling errors and its AWACS not AWAX, but besides that well written.