I like you're writing style. The other fic makes a bit more sense now.

Hi :) *hugs* I'm so glad to see you back and writing again.

I know a little bit about Kingdom Hearts...unlike YGO or YnM...but if I read the story/fic I can recognize what's out of place in a general sense and what's not.

I love the fic you've written. Short, simple, sweet. After reading the story, I have a better idea and a greater appreciation for the fandom.