See, this to me is the crux of wrongness in the whole story. He was not justified in taking the dreams. The kiss, okay; the dreams, no. They did not belong to him and his total wrongness just ruins the whole story for me.

Interesting and quite smutty. But I was disappointed in the ending: Sarah and Jareth not in love and Jareth running a harem is just not my cup of tea. Plus all your misuse of language really ruined it for me. "Comber-bun" for "cummerbund". SRSLY?

God you're illiterate. Cummerbund, not comber-bun.

this series was so good! dark, but i think this is how fae stories are supposed to be.

I really love your Jareth/Sarah fan-fictions. this one so far is really interesting. i was just wondering where you found the goblin words or if you created them yourself? Especially words like Tagaan or Rhuukarlaan.

The story is well written. I like Jareth dark and sexy, but here extrapolated. He was too depraved!

How confusing that last chapter is...I didn't understand its significance at all _

What a sad ending though...he doesn't love her?! Then why in chapter 40 does it say that he does? :/

I loved the hints of affection and Jareth's longing throughout, and even though I tend to like evil Jareth, the general feel of hopelessness all the while through the tale made it difficult to enjoy it wholly.

Just read this back to back the whole way through ]

Six hours later and it's still one of the best fanfics

i've read yet ] xx

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This story has some very dark moments which I happen to enjoy because after reading much Laby fanfiction, one does get bored of the same old same old. The spelling could use some work, but overall the writing is not half bad. I have to admit, I am not satisfied with the ending. I believe that Jareth's and Sarah's relationship was not as it should have been with her still as a "mistress" and his harem of girls. I don't believe Jareth to be so lustful. I agree he can be cruel and dark, but not to that degree. That's just my opinion, but all in all, a very beguiling story and one that I should like to read again in the future.

Wow, I have never witnessed Sarah or Jareth being so badass. It was AWESOME!

This story was very well written but soooo unsatisfying! I wish there could have been more of a conclusion with Jareth and Sarah's relationship, but I suppose it was not to be. Anyway, thank you for a beautifully well-written and highly imaginative tale.

It took me a week to read this, and I would gladly spend another reading it again. I love it, and how everything falls into place. True talent is hard to find, and when I find it I am sure to let the authors know. You my dear have an amazing ability to weave tales. I am adding this to my C2 and if you have any faves that you think should also be added to it please let me know and I will.

*snickers* got yourself in trouble with the king eh? wow i have to say this is the longest story you had but i don't quiet see how sarah was evil in this story besides when she was dealing with daniels, primal mostly during the underground though. baring that fantastic read and i approve of how della took care of that coniving talgoon, it took me four days to finish this lol.

till the next story ;),

Desired Rose

I have to say that overall this was not one of my favorite stories of yours but it definitely made me feel some of the strongest emotions. Such as the need to punch Jareth in the face which was satisfactorily satisfied when Linda did it for me... (oh joyous times...)

I also really liked the last chapter you added on. It rounded out the whole ordeal for me and made it seem complete.

Kudos yet again to another story that I couldn't look away from!

Ismira Daugene