Turpin's words were cut short, though, as Nellie found it now a suitable time to knee him forcefully in the groin.
XD Great story so far!

:O please update this! I sense happiness is just around the corner for Nellie! Don't leave me this way! I love this story, I read it all in a few hours, it's one of the best!

pfffffffffffffffft XD he killed Lucy just like that that was funny

omg this is awesome :D

Please please please update! I love this, and I wanna see what happens! If you need any help or ideas or just an opinion I'm here U

I love this story. I hope you continue it although it seems you haven't updated in a while. Anyways I love it great job! :D

I don't have any ideas for you (sorry) but I really hope that you can write/post another chapter soon! The story is amazing!

I think mrs lovett should snap at toby making him run away and after calming down she goes to look for him and finds sweeney who is furious but doesn't kill her...and then they do something...

Gosh, I love this story and I really hope that youcontinue though it's been so long and I promise I won't give up on it.

As for ideas I do beleive it would be satisfying if it ended somewhat with sweeney and Nellie together somehow but not as you said romantic and sappy because that is definately out of character. I think they should find each other somewhere maybe talk even if he doesn't forgive her. But... I hope they can work it out somewho, and some heavy duty explaining should be done by each of the characters to one another.

Just a suggestion and my point of view. Hope it helps and update soon! :)

I love your story and hope you find inspiration soon! Lyra

Finally managed to weave my way through all the chapters... I find this story to be rather well done actually, and keeps in with the characters well enough-except for our favorite barber's sudden comfortableness with the female gender-and I'm a mite sad to see that it hasn't been updated since... February. I'm also afraid my creative well has been running a little dry lately, so I don't have any ideas to recommend.

...Yay for in-depth third person and angst-clouds?

Oh dear, that was rather gruesome.

And awesome ref at the end!:D It's nice to know that some poeple still watch the play. :)

Have Mrs. Lovett go looking for Mr.T and find him wereever he is, crying or something, then have Mr.T get sick with the flu or something like that (and he must puke alot :D) since he's out in the rain for a long time.

I dunno.

Anyway Love the story, oh and I dunno if you are already planning it but have get pregnant, it mgiht be good who knows :)

I just like the story

I didn't even realize that I was reading a murder scene! XD; I'm not saying that I wasn't interested in the story, but I was just so ... into imagining it all until my own imagination got a bit out of control. XD; oh, righty! I found the little engraving of his initials during the murder scene a bit ... cliche, should I say? otherwise, I absolutely love this story! :D

you wanna know what I think? I think that this story is very interesting! (: I'm keen on finding out what's going to happen ( though I do think that I have a vague idea ;) ) and I'm also very happy that you're not going to suddenly make Sweeney into Benjamin Barker just like that. (: good job so far!