Very nice.

that was sad. but how is that rated for friendship. if anything, its a bit angsty... but still, awsome work!
=D

...interesting. Another one of those stories that have Sakura as emotionless.
...at least you don't have her as some extremely powerful character.
...or do you have sasuke running around trying to 'fix' her, realizing he loved her all along.

I however, enjoyed the last line. And while it is short, it is does give another take on this idea (and I like the fact that Sasuke is not thinking, "She's hot.")

what song were you listening to
this is great by the way
and also
could you continue this fic
asta la bye bye

good story. please write more ^.^