you haven't updated in a year? why not? this is a great story!

but i don't think the cullen's had a decent response to 18yo bella who was married and got divorced 5 years ago and has a daughter who's old enough to get married!

and since they're all so slow to pick up on the age thing i think i would be funny if emmett was the first one to ask.. loudly.. in front of everyone!

love it write more

i loved it u were the first person i read from just thought id tell u

next chappy please!

i absulutly luved it so plz write agian

Interesting twist. I like this story and it is definetly cool. I might add a little more meat to the story and possibly get in some descriptive language.

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This is an interesting story idea. I might add in a few more descriptives, or something else of the like. You could definetly go a long way with this.

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i really like this story its a very creative idea for bella it actually makes her seem like she should be that way in the book lol

i love this story. please update soon.

I cant wait till the next chapter for this story. I wanna know what happens so bad! like, you have no idea! Im so loving it already. hehehe

What the hell? Haha Xd love that line.

hey. i love your stories, but this one seems un-bella like. i know this was a dream and all but if bella accepted edward as being a vampire and edward was truthful to her about it why would bella think that edward would not accept her and besides she is ony trying to save him and herself. plus why would she lie to edward about being a winged one when its not like shes a freak in the first place. i just wanted to give you my input but i do think that you are a very talented writer and i love your stlye

Random, but creative...me likey!

Update soon...

XOXO

Katie ;]

hahahahaa! soz i say dat to everything. anyways i just wanted to say that you write god stories! lol! anyways i just wantedto say please write some more! preety please withsugar and Emmett Cullen on top?

see ya

oo! this is good! please write more! please?