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| jo 2008-08-03 ch 16, anon. | abusewat would make this even greater than it is ,is a sex scene ^//^ lol any way this is great cant wait for the next chapter |
| The Fallen One 2008-08-01 ch 16, anon. | abuseYup. Well, I'm glad the two weren't Ravess and Snipe. I kinda like them. But there's the RFA to deal with, along with this mysterious boy. Hm... And Piper and the DA have finally realized that they love the other. Aw... :3 |
| BlueSapphireGirl 2008-07-31 ch 16,  | abuseO..I love it! They've fallen in love with each other! I'm a sucker for Dark Ace and Piper pairings, there's just something about them. Update soon! |
| KisaraCrystal 2008-07-31 ch 16, | abuseYay, Ace and Piper are in love, can't wait until the next chapter. |
| Emil the Fallen 2008-07-15 ch 15, | abuseI'm glad you updated, though I find the idea of Cyclonis and the Dark Ace with good intentions somewhat unnerving. I bet those two figures were Snipe and Ravess. They haven't been mentioned yet throughout the story, as far as I remember, and they only seemed to served Cyclonia for power and out of fear. I guess some people just like being "evil." Well, I hope you update again soon. Bye bye bye... |
| KisaraCrystal 2008-07-15 ch 15, | abuseI love it, I can't wait until the next chapter. |
| Kitty-Cat-01 2008-07-15 ch 15, anon. | abusecant wait for the next chappy. u r doin an exellent job |
| Belle Marionette 2008-07-15 ch 15, | abuseinteresting. can't wait for the next chapter! = ^.^ = |
| DevilsAngelSaphire 2008-07-15 ch 15, | abusewhoa... what if that dude is right, what if it's all some phony idea? Aerrow: I argee with you. update soon. |
| Catza 2008-07-06 ch 14, | abusewhat happens next, im soo exithen:) love your story!! |
| o.O Xiaonikki O.o 2008-06-25 ch 14, | abuseI love yu writeing style ^^ update soon nikki x |
| SparklingAngel 2008-06-20 ch 14, anon. | abuseFantasyfan4ever, *mouth hangs open* you continue to amaze me with your use of creativity and well-detailed stories! I can read your stories nonstop and be so engrossed in them that I hardly notice it's late. You've done a superb job and I support you to continue writing! ^^ *waves arms in the air, cheering* You're a well writer! Believe in yourself!! ~Sparkling A. PS- Terrific 1st story of SH ! *big grin* Continue on, please... |
| Belle Marionette 2008-05-11 ch 14, | abusewonderful. im glad they are letting you live ^_^ heehee |
| KisaraCrystal 2008-05-11 ch 14, | abuseI love it, please do update soon. |
| mn 2008-05-11 ch 14, anon. | abuseIt's good, I think you should be aloud to live. |