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| LocoGreggo 2008-04-21 ch 3,  | abuseAwesome job. Lovely story. Thank you for giving it to me. |
| Elainhe 2008-04-02 ch 2, | abuseI am loving this. It will be my short-lived guilty pleasure, though I have a feeling I will be going over the scenes before going to sleep tonight. There were too many perfect lines to mention them all. Here's just one: "Flack thought it was simple enough, logical enough. Wash away all traces of rat, rinse and eat." |
| Elainhe 2008-04-01 ch 1, | abuseAbsoluetly stunning! You had me laughing out loud! More than once. Poor Flack. You kept his tone beautifully with just the right amount of humour! I really liked how you have potrayed Angell here. |
| Dantana4ever 2008-03-28 ch 3, | abuseI love it! Fiesta is my...second favorite! |
| notesofwimsey 2008-03-13 ch 3, | abuseI love this - erotic and sweet and so Flack to still be thinking about food even when he has Stella in his arms! I think she could cure most of his problems! I wonder what she'd have to do to convince him to eat food from a street vendor, though? The imagination boggles (and then begins to heat up!) |
| Aphina 2008-03-11 ch 3, | abuselol this was very sensual cahapter. Sorry I'm playing ctach up with all the storys at the min. I did love the descriptions of the food and love between them, you really created passion without making it seem strange it ws a haard task but the fact your a brillaant writer helped pull it off. |
| ThnksFrThMmrs87 2008-03-10 ch 3, | abuseK, so even with a T rating, this is me fanning myself. Holy hotness. |
| CarolinaH.Manning 2008-03-10 ch 3, | abusehot :) I think Stella and food is about all that Donnie boy needs to be in Heaven |
| jaed621 2008-03-09 ch 3, | abuseHry there, you know I love this story. As always with your work the idea and the angle were so original. I can always count on the fact that when I read you work I never know where it's going to go, it's always a surprise. This piece had so many interesting sides, the food, the nausea, the sexiness and arousal, the interaction between them...all of it was wonderful. Great job, please, keep writing and I hope you're back on your feet and feeling well soon! Jaed xo |
| geek'd 2008-03-09 ch 3, | abuseAll I can say is: How sweet (no pun intended, :P)! No need to apologise if it was your health keeping you away! And is it serious? Blessings for your recovery! |
| The Little Corinthian 2008-03-09 ch 3, | abuseOh, I hope your surgery goes well! I'll be thinking good thoughts :0) And as far as not getting good smut, that bit with the apple was good smuff, at least. The man just oozes sex, anyway :0) Great job, once more! |
| Madison Bellows 2008-03-09 ch 3, | abuseThat was both hot and hunger inducing :)! |
| TessaStarDean 2008-03-09 ch 3, | abuseLoved it. Funny and cute and hot...and I'm glad you didn't make it smutty. It worked perfectly this way. |
| TwistedSister03 2008-03-09 ch 3, | abuseaww i'm soo sad that its over..but you did an excellent job! |
| feathergirl926 2008-03-09 ch 3, | abuseAwesome ending! |