|Reviews for One Last Banana|
| Edward-is-hunky 5/17/08 . chapter 1
"Bananas trip me up. You keep me from falling."
i love that line
| Gramatical editor 5/16/08 . chapter 1
Good oneshot. In the last paragraph, the first sentance, i dont think there should be a comma... just saying its bugging me a bit. Sounds like a comma splice.
| Niamh929 4/20/08 . chapter 1
HA HA HA great
I laughed out loud and my dog who is sleeping with my boyfriend on my bed both woke up ...
Love it :)
| musically inclined 4/15/08 . chapter 1
Haha. That was cute.
| diana 3/18/08 . chapter 1
hahaha this brightened my evening! thanks!
| R0ckl0bster 3/17/08 . chapter 1
I liked this. made me chuckle.
| ChieriAn9eL 2/29/08 . chapter 1
That was very cute and yes... realistic too.
| nothingleft 2/18/08 . chapter 1
Also very funny, but I did like the spider more. But I loved how you described her eating the banana. ;P
| LivforLove 2/11/08 . chapter 1
Wow. I think this is the only one where Bella's not in love with someTHING other than Edward, well except for the on where Edward is half banana (Ed-nana). That doesn't really count though.
| liarlikeme 2/9/08 . chapter 1
i love this. "Bananas trip me up. You keep me from falling" genius. simply.
| SisterGrimmErin 2/2/08 . chapter 1
very good! i enjoyed this one, very well done! see, it's even making me rhyme...
| Hermione W. Cullen 1/30/08 . chapter 1
| a little erratic 1/28/08 . chapter 1
cute, cute, cute. very cute. very in character for edward, especially.
| thecolouryes 1/27/08 . chapter 1
this was really, really good - very believable! but for some reason, the last paragraph made me loose all of the sanity that i had gained after reading it. odd... ;)
whatever,i really liked it. the last paragraph was really funny.
| Ignorance-Only-Destroys-Us 1/23/08 . chapter 1
hahaha that was really funny
i didn't notice any errors but then again I wasn't really looking for them . . .
eddies getting dumped for a banana