hehe

"Bananas trip me up. You keep me from falling."

i love that line

Good oneshot. In the last paragraph, the first sentance, i dont think there should be a comma... just saying its bugging me a bit. Sounds like a comma splice.

HA HA HA great

I laughed out loud and my dog who is sleeping with my boyfriend on my bed both woke up ...

Love it :)

- B

Haha. That was cute.

Musically Inclined

hahaha this brightened my evening! thanks!

I liked this. made me chuckle.

That was very cute and yes... realistic too.

Also very funny, but I did like the spider more. But I loved how you described her eating the banana. ;P

Wow. I think this is the only one where Bella's not in love with someTHING other than Edward, well except for the on where Edward is half banana (Ed-nana). That doesn't really count though.

i love this. "Bananas trip me up. You keep me from falling" genius. simply.

very good! i enjoyed this one, very well done! see, it's even making me rhyme...

love it.

cute, cute, cute. very cute. very in character for edward, especially.

this was really, really good - very believable! but for some reason, the last paragraph made me loose all of the sanity that i had gained after reading it. odd... ;)

whatever,i really liked it. the last paragraph was really funny.

hahaha that was really funny

i didn't notice any errors but then again I wasn't really looking for them . . .

eddies getting dumped for a banana