Sorry I never reviewed this before. It's an amazing story. It's so full of detail and good transition and all the right emotions. I loved itX!XD

I'm an idiot. Thank you for making me read this. I only regret that I haven't before. Well, I think I read part of it, because the beginning sounds familiar.

This does just flow beautifully. The transition between the present and past was well done, and I love how you portrayed them in this. This entire thing was just fantastic.

Again, thanks for making me read this, and here is one of the reviews that this story deserves.

Aww, how adorable :)

I especcially loved the line: “The untimely death of my better sense of judgment,” that made me LOL

Nice ome :)

That was absolutely fantastic. I pretty much loved to read it. Thank you lot for writing something amazing like this ^^

This is the story that inspired me to submit my own fanfictions here. It's so realistic an well done, as well as so darn SWEET! I love Sheelos; by far my favourite pairing. ^^
Keep writing!

Oh my lord...

This is gorgeous! ^_^

I couldn't tear my eyes away from this one-shot, FD! So very, VERY wonderfully written... I'm speechless... O_O

The idea, the flow, the interaction between Zelos and Sheena... and the very end. Just... wow...

This is amazing. Truly wonderful. I mean it. I don't know how long this took to finish, but it was well worth the struggle and effort. :) I don't know how you pieced together such a long and glorious one-shot, but kudos. This is a total instant fav.

Please, for the love of Sheelos, never stop writing. ^_^

This was truly fantastic! It warmed my heart in every sense of the word. You write so well and i love the idea of the coffee shop it was so cute...I might see if can't get myself a job in a coffee shop. I might find my own personal Zelos there :D

Thanks for a great story!!

So THIS is the fic you've been telling me about... and damn it was worth the wait... I actually didn't even expect it this soon, but it's a gem among the Sheelos collection, It's been so long since I've been treated to a long, well written Sheelos fic. Your writing really is great ^_^.

I really love how you characterized them, you kept Zelos in character with his quirky flirtacious charm, and yet you somehow avoided making him a pervert, which is something I probably can't do ^^; The transitions were nice and the situation was pretty unique, the backstory was differnt than what I'm used to so it was a treat, and the tone that the inserted song provided created a good mood for the fic (I could hear it ringing in my mind while I read). I loved how in the end, Zelos acted like some flustered teenaged boy trying to ask a girl out for the first time... it's so very different isn't it Zelos, when it's a girl you actually like? And good for you, turning the other girls off.

A very sweet ending too. Thanks for writing this! Keep writing!

Wow, how long did that take to finish anyway? Just curious...It looks like it took weeks... or more! It was so detailed that I'm left in awe. I tip my head to you. Seriously, you're like a Jedi master of writing this sort of thing. (And yes I'd like to share this with the entire class)XD

Anyway, when I went to check my inbox and seen the title for this, at first I thought it was just another silly story from some of the alerts I have and then when I glanced and seen your name I was like: “Oh...um, er... Yay!” Eh, yeah, and suddenly the title sounded much better to me.^^

(laugh) I love the words you come up with like escapade, it's only funny to me because I rarely read or hear these things, and let me tell you something, comatose isn't even in my dictionary(though I think I've heard it before)...I mean I'm seriously sitting here having a good time looking some of these things up! Hah! That's educational for ya!

-Commencing favorite part ninjutsu!- (yeah it's late, I have few braincells)

“Perhaps he had suffered head trauma?” - I had a giggle fit here by the way.

“Look, I appreciate the effort it took you to put together that offer in a non-perverted manner.” - What genius is this? Love it.^^

“she had entered their territory, like tigers waiting to pounce.” - that was just plain funny, it fit so perfectly to what someone reading this would imagine. Hiss!

-Ceasing jutsu-

You really made me want to see Zelos at that age, the way you portray him makes him seem so adorable that I can almost picture him.^^ Not that he isn't adorable anyway!

Note that I had to write this review, as I read, heh, there was no way I would be able to remember what to review about with such a long one...well you get the idea.^^

Why would I beat you with a stick?! (offers stick back with a bow) No Master! I will not do it!...Hah, I had fun with this review, as I hope you did as well.^-^ Yay! So much Sheelos love all around! (sniff) It almost brings a tear to my eye.

This one was way too cute Faux, you outdid yourself, me thinks. (nod) I might even end up reading this again sometime so no deletion of this one understand? (scrutinize)

Whoo! Hope you're happy with this reviewer and not completely annoyed. Neh, I can only hope to take after Zelos, annoying yet utterly lovable.^-^
This Liger is out.