Finally I got access to a computer! -Does weird and funny victory dance- Very cute, dolly. I like this a lot since he didn't fall head over heels. Keep it up with the good work!
If he died then the story is much more sad but in some way it's deeper. If he didn't then... You should write more. Like what happened next. If you don't though, it's still really good. Keep writing.
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