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Crysie
2009-07-17 . chapter 34
I was reading this trilogy and it is amazing. I got to the last part where it said there was a sequel to Because I have you but I can't find it. Can you tell me where it is. Your an amazing writer, you made me smile and cry and I don't do that often. Good work...
itsi3
2009-02-08 . chapter 34
What sequel?
I LOVED it!
There were some very memorable and powerful scenes! I only got a chance to copy 2 of them so here they are:
Chapter 13:
Jayden came into the living room, flopping down onto the couch, exhaling loudly. Derek glanced over at him, raising an eyebrow at his apparant frustration, but when Jayden continued to pout at the floor, he shrugged, and turned back to the TV. If the kid wasn't going to talk, he sure as hell wasn't going to force it out of him. He hated having to deal with emotions, unless absolutely necessary, and this was one of those cases that he could avoid it, unless Jayden brought it up.
His eyes had only been fixed on the TV for all of two seconds when Jayden shot straight up in his seat, glaring at Derek.
"Don't you know what an exhilerated sigh means? It means I've got something on my mind! Fix me!"

Epilogue:
"Not funny, Derek!"
He stopped laughing long enough to nod his head, struggling for air.
"It looked pretty funny from down here actually," he told her, and she only turned redder. "Here's the deal, babe. You may cook me food, kiss me, and clean up after me, but I keep you on your feet, not to mention keep your gaurd up."
"By smacking me in the head with a pillow?"
He shrugged, still grinning.
"What can I say?" he challenged, superiority in his voice. "When you got it, you got it. And I got it in all the right places, baby."
She rolled her eyes, acting disgusted with him as he laughed at her.
"You're an egotistical loser," she said, but she was grinning as she hit his shoulder to try and get him to stop laughing at her. "Derek! Give it up. It's not funny anymore."
"If it wasn't funny, I wouldn't be laughing."
He did, eventually, stop. It took about four smacks to the side of the head, a couple of threats to not kiss him for a week, and a good lecture about she hoped his laughter could keep him company at night for him to finally give it up, but he stopped.
But there was so much more that I just LOVED!
Awsome job!! Very addicting plot and writting!!
~Crystal
itsi3
2009-02-06 . chapter 14
I get stress sickness. I'm gettin sick to my stomach just thinkin about Casey kissin Ryan and not tellin Derek! If I don't read until stuff settles I'll be worried sick for fictional characters all day at school tomarrow! How awful is that? FICTIONAL scenerio! FICTIONAL Characters! But I WILL be sick,lol
LOVE it!!
Poor Jayden!
~Crystal
rakukidz
2009-01-30 . chapter 33
I just love the trilogy. Can't wait to start reading the sequel
MiSzJOEJONAS21
2008-10-15 . chapter 33
YAY beautiful story xD
MiSzJOEJONAS21
2008-10-15 . chapter 32
YAY i have to admit i had hecka doubts he wouldn't wake up but im glad this story came to a good ending xD
MiSzJOEJONAS21
2008-10-14 . chapter 30
YAY i knew the baby was derek's!
MiSzJOEJONAS21
2008-10-14 . chapter 28
YAY THERE ALMOST BACK TOGETHER!! HAPPY FACE xD
MiSzJOEJONAS21
2008-10-12 . chapter 21
YAY FINALLY DEREK KNOWS! FRIKEN RYAN IS GETTING SO ANNOYING!! but its bad that casey's cheating on him... but YAY i wanted derek to finally be all mad and and knowing stuff. instead of happy and clueless.
MiSzJOEJONAS21
2008-10-11 . chapter 17
OMG THE LOCKET!! SOO SWEETT!! AND the speech b4 the locket! made me cry! great job
MiSzJOEJONAS21
2008-10-11 . chapter 13
OMFG!! thats all i can say rite now UGGH!
Jdancer189
2008-09-26 . chapter 34
there's another story to this series? I can't find it in your profile
jacksparrowluva12
2008-08-31 . chapter 20
Really good story, lots of drama, and the characters are really believable. Props to you for being able to make up good storyline's to all three stories (from the trilogy).
Also, when does Derek tell her Casey she didn't want another kid? They were visiting Jeff, yes, but what chapter?

Thanks, good story again. :)
DaseyFreak
2008-08-05 . chapter 1
Cant wait to finish it!
DayDreamer0109
2008-06-22 . chapter 12
What's wrong with Casey?!?! Can't she see what's going on?...emotional affair!?!?!?...at this point she needs to stop this now before she crosses the line physically.
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