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| Ellie 5192 2008-08-16 ch 1, | abuseI just love your writing and this story is no different. It so true to them, and really gets the message across with just the right amount of... everything. i love it, and i hope you'll keep up the great work, because you are one of my favourite writers |
| LY00 2008-03-28 ch 1, | abuseGreat story. It's the perfect description of their relationship without being too sappy and sentimental. Love this image: "Not when she looks at his image and knows he’s 3 million light-years away and counting, because the universe is expanding and each day they are a little further apart." Well written. Thanks for writing. |
| BettyHall223 2008-01-31 ch 1, | abuseVery good and well written. |
| Zoser 2008-01-26 ch 1, | abuseA gentle sweetness - nice work. I hate seeing them apart after so long. |
| Starr484 2008-01-25 ch 1, | abuseCute story! |
| Oma-1 2008-01-25 ch 1, | abuseI miss them! ;) |
| ALIMOO1971 2008-01-24 ch 1, | abusegreat short story... per hapes a sequal qhere he shows up at atlantis and surprise her and he stay on atlantis for a few days before heading back to earth... just an idea |
| pain in the mikta 2008-01-24 ch 1, | abuseTouching and splendidly written! |
| mara-anni 2008-01-24 ch 1, | abuse*shippy sigh* That was very sweet and sad and...sweet. Nice work! |
| Hope Leslie Hermnharry 2008-01-24 ch 1, | abuseHow sweet...I love it! |
| AT Fan 2008-01-24 ch 1, | abuseah perfect great job I do see the lonlieness in her face sometimes. |
| Browniesprite 2008-01-24 ch 1, | abuseWonderful, just wonderful. |
| Thara June 2008-01-24 ch 1, | abuseThat was really awesome! It was very impressive! thx |
| sammie77 2008-01-24 ch 1, | abuseWow - so good! Almost made me cry! |
| PatriciaS 2008-01-24 ch 1, | abuseNice thoughts and nicely done. |