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Ellie 5192
2008-08-16
ch 1,
abuseI just love your writing and this story is no different. It so true to them, and really gets the message across with just the right amount of... everything.
i love it, and i hope you'll keep up the great work, because you are one of my favourite writers
LY00
2008-03-28
ch 1,
abuseGreat story. It's the perfect description of their relationship without being too sappy and sentimental.

Love this image: "Not when she looks at his image and knows he’s 3 million light-years away and counting, because the universe is expanding and each day they are a little further apart." Well written.

Thanks for writing.
BettyHall223
2008-01-31
ch 1,
abuseVery good and well written.
Zoser
2008-01-26
ch 1,
abuseA gentle sweetness - nice work.
I hate seeing them apart after so long.
Starr484
2008-01-25
ch 1,
abuseCute story!
Oma-1
2008-01-25
ch 1,
abuseI miss them! ;)
ALIMOO1971
2008-01-24
ch 1,
abusegreat short story... per hapes a sequal qhere he shows up at atlantis and surprise her and he stay on atlantis for a few days before heading back to earth... just an idea
pain in the mikta
2008-01-24
ch 1,
abuseTouching and splendidly written!
mara-anni
2008-01-24
ch 1,
abuse*shippy sigh*

That was very sweet and sad and...sweet. Nice work!
Hope Leslie Hermnharry
2008-01-24
ch 1,
abuseHow sweet...I love it!
AT Fan
2008-01-24
ch 1,
abuseah perfect great job I do see the lonlieness in her face sometimes.
Browniesprite
2008-01-24
ch 1,
abuseWonderful, just wonderful.
Thara June
2008-01-24
ch 1,
abuseThat was really awesome!

It was very impressive!

thx
sammie77
2008-01-24
ch 1,
abuseWow - so good! Almost made me cry!
PatriciaS
2008-01-24
ch 1,
abuseNice thoughts and nicely done.
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