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| Fala-Li 2008-03-21 ch 1,  | abuseokay, your thought of a husky whisper from heero in the night made me fall out of my chair swooning. LOL. good job, this was cute. |
| Velaris 2008-03-17 ch 1, | abuseyay cute. great idea! |
| Sirius'Vixen 2008-02-16 ch 1, | abusethis is very cute and i totally agree with you! the husky whisper in the night seems so much more his style! |
| AzNAnGeL07 2008-02-10 ch 1, | abusebwhahaa. heero's adorable. in a twisted sense of the word. x] love it! :] |
| Purdy 2008-02-01 ch 1, | abuseYeah, that was absolutely adorable and completely agree w/ you there. I just love the ending, it was perfect. And I can really see Heero becoming the type of guy to poke fun at Relena like that, it was really subtle. One thing, you might want to cool it w/ the overly romantic descriptions, like how the stars played off her skin, etc, etc. It's just as weird as having Heero use the word, 'baby.' Other than that, a great little funny one shot here. By any chance, did you get this idea from a show called Love Bites? |
| lilac310 2008-01-24 ch 1, | abusehaha...i love this! I can totally understand..I'm not the sort of girl to like 'terms of endearment' either..it actually seems a bit overrated for me. I prefer my own name...and yea, between Heero and Relena, especially after seeing the series, one can definitely tell that their names are their own 'terms of endearment' ...just by the way they say it..oh god, Heero's so hot! Keep it up! I just love the way you made their conversation flow...a sequel or another one-shot, perhaps? ..tee-hee! |
| SamuraiGirl7 2008-01-23 ch 1, | abuseYeah Heero would never do the whole "Baby" "Babe" "Honey" "Hon" or any other 'normal' term of endearment. Nicely Done, I really enjoyed this. |
| animechick2487 2008-01-23 ch 1, | abuseCute. I agree that Heero would never call Relena honey... |