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| ChibiChibiMoon15 2008-05-20 ch 11,  | abusei really like this story i think its really cute that Rayek is a girl. it really suits him/her |
| Doctor Madwoman 2008-04-25 ch 10, | abusePoor Mr. Button (Clicks) Cute and sweet and making me diabetic. Slightly. The pinky swear was adorable, ya know? (Showers Wyndy with Teir, Voll, Hoykar and Rayek baked goods, with Jareth cookies on the side) |
| Tsuyu-the-Hanyou 2008-04-10 ch 9, | abuseBooya! You are alive! Loved it! |
| Doctor Madwoman 2008-04-09 ch 9, | abuseLovely, as usual. And, just so we can get it out into the open: DAMN YOU STAN! Okay, on to business: How about Winnowill and Hoykar discover leather/fisnets/corsets/lingere? To intice their men... Or how about the Elves getting drunk and singing modern songs? For some horrid reason, I can see Voll and his male Chosen leaping up and singing 'Men In Tights' |
| Doctor Madwoman 2008-04-01 ch 8, | abuseOkay, you may have Teir back now. (Faenaps Jareth) Meeheehee. I love Renya. I've told you this thousands of times, but I still can't help but mention it.(hugs Renya and Wyndy)And I adore the interaction between Leetah and Rayek(and her insult about Cutter's stench).;) A little error in this chap and the last: When Teir is coaching Rayek through her labor, it should be 'bear' down, not 'bare' down. And when Chot's telling Renya to shut up, it should be 'quiet' in place of 'quite'. More story or the Jareth GETS it. (Holds chopstick to Jareth's throat) |
| Tsuyu-the-Hanyou 2008-04-01 ch 8, | abuse*Rolls around on the ground laughing her head off* Chot you dumb-**! HAHAHAHA! I liked it! More soon please! |
| Doctor Madwoman 2008-03-20 ch 6, | abuse(Elfnaps Teir) Well done, well done. Nightscream is certainly a smug creature when he wants to be, yes? Bloody cat. If you ever wish to see Teir again, you will give us more story. |
| Doctor Madwoman 2008-02-24 ch 5, | abuse(Eats cookies, glomps Wyndy back) You know, this is even better the second time read. I love how Leetah and Rayek are actually friends...it works better for them that way, I think. And Rayek's stubborness is just awesome in either gender.(Glomps Rayek, gets arm twisted behind back) Augh! PAIN!! Here, have a digital cookie with extra pixels. (Sits and waits for more) ~Rilly PS: Are we going to continue that Voll and Rayek daddy ficlet, or shall we put it on hiatus for a while? (Pokes Wyndy curiously) More cookies to you...(Shifty eyes) |
| Tsuyu-the-Hanyou 2008-02-19 ch 5, | abuseI accept your bribe, *Chews cookies and hums* and tell you thank you for another awesome chapter! |
| Doctor Madwoman 2008-02-18 ch 4, | abuseAh, so you've joined the dark side, too! Well done, Wyndy. Give us more. You know how much I love this already... More... ~Rilly |
| Tsuyu-the-Hanyou 2008-02-18 ch 4, | abuseThis is awesome! Please write more! I wanna see what happens next! |