...Esme already knew Bella?

I love this story. Please continue!

LOL awesome story. Carry it on!
xoxoxoox

Extraordinary

Tremendous

Amazing!

Very interesting!

Reading this makes me feel excited!

That was very entertaining.

Wow! I like to read a different take on Bella's character.

Please continue!
I love this story!
You could make an ex boyfriend of bellas move to fork, and start going to her school! And he tries to get bella back but edward and him get in a fight and she gets angry at both of them and goes for a drive to clear her head, but she have a car crash, and ends up in hospital and edward apoligizes and then you can make a sequal and have them get married and have kids! For married you can do something like they lose her wedding dress, but they find it 2 days later! Stuff like that!
If you want a picture of a beutiful wedding dress ask me and i will send you the link! :D PLZ CONTINUE YOUR STORY!

DPN'T END IT!!PUT SOME DAMN DRAMA INTO IT! LAUREN FORCING HERSELF UPON EDWARD!! BELLA IN A CAR ACCIDENT! DRAMA, PERSON DRAMA!

Love it!

:-D loved that!

you can't just end the story there