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| CazzBlade 2008-05-20 ch 1,  | abuseLove this! Thanx for keeping me entertained while I write my essays! :D Cazz x |
| GW 2008-03-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseI haven't read any Thoughtcrimes fic before this, but since I love this author, I decided to take a look. I think I'm hooked on a new fandom now. This was really good. Even though I'm not familiar with the characters, I could get a feel for who they are and what they're like from what was written. So many fanfic authors don't develop the characters because they're known to most readers. Stealth Dragon takes the time to do this and I'm glad for it. There's also a really interesting plot, and who doesn't love that? |
| CoolBreeze1 2008-01-25 ch 1, | abuseVery cool! I haven't seen Thoughtcrimes yet, but I know the basic premise. And since Brendan is Sheppard is JF, it was easy to imagine. I've got to see that movie now... |
| Karri-1671 2008-01-24 ch 1, | abuseYAY! You posted to FF. :sques and hugs you: I enjoyed reading it again. You always whump him so beautifully. |
| reen212000 2008-01-24 ch 1, | abuseYep. Read it again. Made me hurt a little more. Thanks. |
| Delka 2008-01-24 ch 1, | abuseEnjoyable read. Thanks! |
| Ditzyleo 2008-01-24 ch 1, | abuseYou handled this fabulously. Loved the vulerablity you showed, but you still had him totally in charcter - a hard trick but one you have mastered with a flare. Nice stuff! |
| writerjc 2008-01-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseNice work! You did a terrific job. As much as I would have liked more of this show as a series, I'm happy the way things turned out. And it's nice to see that it has it's own section, now. :) Write more, please. |
| Titan5 2008-01-23 ch 1, | abuseTruly magnificent!! I loved everything - from Brendan waking up half-naked and totally confused in the alley to the guards finding him to his near panic at not being able to remember. I loved Freya's concern and the way she looked out after him. The rape kit was handled very tastefully and I loved Brendan's mental comments on the process. The ending was so realistic and displayed the trauma that keeps on after the event is over. How could you not be paranoid after that? Wonderful, wonderful job! |
| Mangst 2008-01-23 ch 1, | abuseThis is wonderful. You made Brendan vulnerable without making him weak or out of character. Your opening scene was a great choice. It grabbed me immediately. |
| ga unicorn 2008-01-23 ch 1, | abuseWonderful story. The characters were very well done. And I enjoyed how you handled slowly revealing what had happened to Brendan. Excellent. |