Hi, great story so far, very origanel and all. Mostly I like it but there`s just this one little point I thought you should know.

In the very first chapter your main character blames Robert Neville for `the dude who caused all this **`. It wasn`t Neville who created the KV virus. He was the lead scientist working on a cure.
At the beginning of the film the woman the reporter is talking to is Dr Kreving-something(cant remember her name) that created the cure for cancer and caused the outbreak. It was her that cause all the **.

Anyway please post anyther chapter soon. I`m anxious to find out what happens next. bye

I hope you don't just leave thid hanging. Its really good! :)

Lol, cute.

Nice!! I have to say, this is definately my style. Keep it up! Don't forget to keep adding inthose chapters. :3

She's at least got her act together. After so long, I'd already have shot myself, or died looking for others. :/

Hey! :) I decided this was a very good story and I'm really liking how its turning out. Please keep it up.

Awesome dude xD I'm gonna end up writing one as well *nods*

I think its a great begining to a great legend (ha ha you get the legend part... nevermind)

ok ch 2 has changed (or maybe I was looking at the wrong ch. I am now officially hooked Audrey has got me fascinated and I can't wait to read more -thanks a million

Paul

I Liked chapter 1 but could not see how ch2 related to it. Please write more so I can see how this grows

Paul