Hm. It seems like you rushed it at the end, but overall it still is a pretty kawaii story. ].

cute and a nice story

Um... ok. I'm not really a big fan of T.K and Davis together but i guess the fan fic shows them kind of cute. I think u did great, continue plz?

I LOVED this fic How cute! But just take away the tabnote at the bottom...I.e: NO FLAMES! Just ask for criticism RATHER than flames. Anyhoot, this was one of the better fanfics I've read in my day. Beisdes How The Evil Flying Spoon Kidnapped Many Moore and And There Were Monks Bouncing On The Green...and anything by Lady_Lioness...you're still very good! Don't get me wrong!

Awww! That's so sweet! And written extremely well. More? Of course I want more! _

Yes! I found another great Daikeru! Yea! I love this stuff! Write another, write another! _

YAY! DAIKERU! DAIKERU! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAH!

I loooove it! Daikeru is sooo cute and the story was really good* I really wish TK and Davis really did DNA-digivolve.

Coooooooooooooooooooooooool! This was really a romantic fic, I loved the touch of the DNA-volving, that was just plain original, and cool.