Reviews for Walking A Fine Line

Reviews For: Walking A Fine Line

acer-sigma 2008-04-01 ch 2,	abuseAh the Third Doctor eh...always a fun one when going up against authority figures! Nice idea to have the Time Lords sending him there to check up on the 'disturbance.' Of course it won't be easy. Even with Kirk and crew sympathtic, Starfleet isn't going to brook interference. So I'm looking forward to seeing how you plan on getting the Doctor and Sarah-Jane to accomplish their mission. "Going back inside Spock fought down the urge to run screaming from the box and spend the rest of his days praying in a Vulcan temple." BTW, loved that line ;)
JovianJeff 2008-03-31 ch 2,	abuseBravo! That was a magnificient chapter! I loved the interactions of the 3rd Doctor with Kirk and crew. Glad they were able to walk into the TARDIS, and what misunderstandings there were, easily mended. I love this approach, again showing how imaginative you are with concepts. This one has the promise of being very intriguing, and the fact the Time Lords don't appear to know anything about the Guardian of Forever adds to the portend of great things to come. Which is pretty much a trademark with your stories. Thank you for continuing this one!
Nighthowler 2008-03-29 ch 1,	abuseI just discovered your 'teaser' for this wonderful crossover and I couldn't resist. Like flies to honey, I can never fight the lure of a good crossover, and yours certainly qualifies. Devouring these first two chapters, I quickly guessed which realities you were messing with, had a quick squee of joy - which frightened my dogs no end - and now am waiting breathlessly for more. I'm thoroughly enjoying your clean, crisp writing style, which manages to capture and mesh two very dynamic realities and meld them - apologies, Spock! - into a neat little adventure. And you chose a Classic Doctor as well! What joy! I simply can't wait to see where you go with this. Please, continue!
Harry2 2008-03-28 ch 2,	abuseNow THIS is going to be SWEET! The third Doctor and SJS meeting up with the original Enterprise. And Doctor, I DON'T think you are going to be able to shut down the Guardian. Maybe work out an arrangement with it, but shut it down, no.
Kyer 2008-02-08 ch 1,	abuseSince this is Classic Star Trek, dare I hope for some Classic Doctor? (Not that I don't love the new ones, but everyone is writing them now and we hardly ever get to see William, Patrick, Jon, Tom, Peter..ect in action anymore. One problem if this is Doctor Who your crossing...why are all the intercoms on that you can hear the Tardis throught the Enterprise? The Enterprise is pretty large to explain it any other way other than some sort of dimensional shift.
JovianJeff 2008-01-28 ch 1,	abuseMagnificient! A wonderful teaser and again I love how you nail the characterizations in your writing. Especially the nounces, and mannerisms like raised eyebrow or unique forms of humor specific with certain characters. I am looking forward to more from this tale. Thank you for writing this!
FireSenshi2 2008-01-26 ch 1,	abuseOkay now you absolutely have to update! Pretty please! :)
jenetri 2008-01-24 ch 1, anon.	abuseI love TOS and crossover stories. So please write more soon!
acer-sigma 2008-01-23 ch 1,	abuseGrinding mental sound? Sounds like the Doctor, or at the very least another Time Lord is about to make an appearance to clean someones temporal mess.
Harry2 2008-01-23 ch 1,	abuseI THINK I know what the crossover is with! And if I am right, this is going to be only the 2ND crossover that I have ever read involing a certain British SF series that you KNOW I love and Classic Trek! Now, lets see if my hunch is correct!
Forge2 2008-01-23 ch 1,	abuseInteresting...

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