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Soten-ni-zase 11/24/11 . chapter 14
You...you KILLED MAI!

YOU BASTARD!(South Park)

;A;

Poor Mai, killed for teh dramaz
hjlsgf 6/6/11 . chapter 12
"And I'm out of knives."

Totally TOTALLY in character. Love it.
dont stop baby 8/7/10 . chapter 14
...WAT THE FUCK? U killed MAI! Y the hell did u kill Mai?(srry for the yelling and cussing but im a big maiko fan). Seriously tho...y did u kill Mai? Thats mean. Is this gonna be a zutara fic? I dont got a prob with that as long as Aang has somebody. I still luv the story but i never handle deaths well. Keep on writing.
fincle 7/14/10 . chapter 14
waaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhh! that has to be the saddest thing i ever read! saddest yet coolest!1
lee 7/14/10 . chapter 5
omg! i can totally tell zuko and katara are going to be together! thanks for the headsup!EEEEP!
Marie Anne 6/29/10 . chapter 12
Are you going to do a Toph and Zuko chapter.

In my opinion, I thought the couple was cute but that would be kinda weird.
Marie Anne 6/29/10 . chapter 5
I guess the kiss was okay... but for me being a Zutara fan, I would like to see more interaction with them.

Zuko must have been sooo surprised.

I thought Katara was going to slap him or start a fight.
Marie Anne 6/29/10 . chapter 3
I just loved the Zutara part! If I met a guy like Zuko I wouldn't mind being taken on a "mission" like the one they're on. Too bad I couldn't been in Katara's place when she and Zuko were falling.
GhostMajor 2/21/10 . chapter 14
This series just gets better and better. Though the last part had me crying like a baby, it still fit in with the story very well, and added a nice touch of drama to the storyline. Keep up the good work!
dwelian 5/27/09 . chapter 14
;_;
dwelian 5/27/09 . chapter 9
Intriguing! It will be good to see when (and how!) Aang will open the last chakra. I like that Aang's the one to bring up the whole "we're related" bit to Zuko, and it would be so weird to be in that position! Aang is totally a gran-pappy, the rest are way too stiff for him. If he ever has to masquerade as an old man again (like that first trip to Omashu) then Zuko will NEVER hear the end of it.
dwelian 5/27/09 . chapter 4
This is just nice. I like the new writing style with abbreviated scenes. Sokka needed some attention, and he sure has gotten it! I love how the first thing he wants to tell someone about Aang and Zuko is that they're DORKS. Dorks! Hee!
dwelian 5/27/09 . chapter 2
can't. stop. LAUGHING! Snotty attitude! nwahahahahahahahahaha!

...oh god I share humor with Sokka *flails!*
wolf's lament 5/16/09 . chapter 14
Mai! I wonder how this'll affect Azula. I think it makes sense that Azula would finally hurt someone she (somewhat) cared about. Her determination to kill Zuko was definately leading to something more sinister happening in the story.
wolf's lament 5/16/09 . chapter 13
Poor Mai. She just isn't having an easy time, though with the friends (or should I say, friend) she keeps I guess it's not too surprising. I'm glad the next chapter's up, 'cause I don't think I would have liked waiting for the next chapter.
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