AH! PETAPHILIA! *cowers*

If you'd changed it to make Jim older this wouldn't have been so frightening. O_O And script format is annoying, hard to read, and not allowed on FF.N.

It was really random that Jim just randomly sang that song...but I guess thats the best way to approach it.

ALSO, yaoi...is Guy-Guy sex... like in DETAIL. Trust me I've written enough. Shounen-ai eans guy-guy love.

Other than that, I liked it _ I think you should write more just not script format.

aw...cute

how sweet! i loved it!

exalent yaoi i liked it make some more and tell me

Hey Ange-Chan loved the fic man you're an awsome writer keep it comin'. My fic keeps getting Bashed by people ::sighs:: oh well guess i just won't write anymore.

See ya space cowgirl

Jade

I Like this one. Its reallly cool. I'd be happy to read more. Make Ch. 2

Thanks for the comments

Very sappy but over all good.

I like it...you should write a NC-17...just kidding. But anyway, Its good. Write more!

AWW! *tears up* That's so kawaii! I love it! *applaude*

Um...kool...I think...**scratches head** yeah, kool...interesting...

How old is Jim?

ummm...

*twitches* Script format! Oh, the horror!

lol all i have to say is... that was - interesting... lol