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| Rob-girl 2008-03-07 ch 2, | abuseI don't really understand why Angelina just forgave Fred like THAT, but I liked the ending. I don't think the two parts really go together though. Having Fred all over some French girl, Angelina seeing, and then Angelina asking Fred out just doesn't make sense to me. I love your work, but could you please explain this one to me? |
| JACk Sparrow's Rum 2008-02-29 ch 1, | abuseAbsolutely hilarious :)) |
| Ron Lover6789 2008-02-16 ch 2, | abuseThat was a great way for her to get out of telling him about the George incident. Really sweet! I love it! you've done such a good job. |
| WeasleyForMe 2008-02-13 ch 2, | abuseFluffy, cute and funny... really great story! |
| remuslives 2008-02-13 ch 2, | abusethat was cute. and plenty of laugh out loud moments. |
| alwayssirius 2008-01-30 ch 1, | abuseLoved it! Short, cute, and the end was funny! Can't believe it wasn't Fred, poor Angela. Great job and love your writing |
| Starlighttwinkle 2008-01-29 ch 1, | abuseWow, I absolutely love this! It's one of the best things I've read on this site! Funny, cute, and well written! Perfect! Every sentence in this review ended in an exclamation point! Wow! |
| redglasses 2008-01-29 ch 2, | abuseAwesome twoshot! That was undeniably cute! =] Great job! |
| Bishounenchaser 2008-01-29 ch 2, | abuseOh this was cute and very funny. I loved George in this, you made his personality stand out a bit more besides being Fred's brother. Angelina inner monologue was amusing as well. |
| Skysong 2008-01-29 ch 2, | abuseOh, that was just fantastic!! Love the different perspective (and LOVED the "no one looks after MY sodium needs" bit from Ange). Yay for maraudernumba5! |
| Converse Rok Star 2008-01-28 ch 2, | abusesequil, or at least make ir longer! |
| AmazingBouncingFerret445 2008-01-28 ch 2, | abuseawesome chapter! i actually laughed out loud at the snape part. this is a really cute story. please update soon! :D |
| stinkabhel 2008-01-28 ch 2, | abuse:)) Hilarious. |
| sinful delight 2008-01-28 ch 2, | abuseAwesome story! I really enjoyed it! I'm just like Angelina, I eat chocolate when I've had a bad day and lets just say I've been eating a lot of it this past week. But anyway... great job! It has just the right amount of humour and romance! When I first started reading the chapter I was worried about those damn french tarts but i see that there was no fear! Ange wins! hehehe Great work! |
| GoddessofYouth 2008-01-28 ch 2, | abuseGreat Story. |