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| Sorceress Fantasia 2008-08-01 ch 9,  | abuseThis series looks really interesting thus far, and I especially enjoyed the one where Balthier proposed. Looking forward to seeing more of this soon! |
| S. Whiner 2008-07-27 ch 4, | abuseBe careful about your phrasing, but you have the makings of a really good series of drabbles. |
| Anya Urameshi 2008-06-16 ch 7, | abuseIt's alright. Take your time. It's better to work really hard and make it good, then to rush something and have it turn out bad for the sake of updating. These little stories are worth the wait. Love, Anya |
| Milana-Despana 2008-05-16 ch 7, | abuseOh, I love this pairing, and am sad at the lack of chapters for it. Which is why i am a leader of the Balthier/Vaan pairing C2 which you were just added to! |
| Firey Chronicles 2008-05-15 ch 7, | abuseOkay I’m sorry but I’m sensing you’re definitely running out of ideas XDD How about try one for jealously… from Ashe’s perspective or smth? Just an idea (as with penelo, basch… not fran though) |
| Firey Chronicles 2008-05-15 ch 6, | abuse...lol I got the feeling you're running out of ideas |
| Firey Chronicles 2008-05-15 ch 5, | abuse… No comment from me either |
| Firey Chronicles 2008-05-15 ch 4, | abuse^.^ |
| Firey Chronicles 2008-05-15 ch 3, | abuseBump? |
| Firey Chronicles 2008-05-15 ch 2, | abuseluv it ^^ (I'm basically bumping for you as I think you deserve more than 10) |
| Firey Chronicles 2008-05-15 ch 1, | abuse*squee~* |
| JustAnAmateur 2008-03-19 ch 7, | abuseSorry,can't help you with the BETA part...hope you can find one. I think this by far your best chapter cause...well,proposing it's really the easiest way to make a reader happy...sort of,and the describing part is also good. Overall,as an X-Play host(in my dreams),I'll give you a 4 out of 5. Theme...'Game'? |
| JustAnAmateur 2008-03-19 ch 6, | abuseNot really,it's an interesting ending...well the Teddy Bear part is quite sweet. Next theme...'blank'? |
| JustAnAmateur 2008-03-19 ch 5, | abuseYes,it does seem like a predictable plot but it's not the worst out there so don't beat yourself up too hard. I'll start requesting theme in every review,this time...how about...'bells'. |
| JustAnAmateur 2008-03-02 ch 4, | abuseOkay,last theme request for today. 'Puppy'! |