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Lucki Ducki Kirbi
2008-05-16
ch 13,
abuse-gigglesnort- Aw, that was really cute.
Hoddmimirswoods
2008-05-16
ch 13,
abuseAw! This is probably my favorite drabble that you've written so far.
The dialog is great and the idea is adorable.
Sawlt to Your Suger
2008-05-15
ch 13,
abuseooh. that one was cute. :D i like cats. not my fave, but you've been in need of some ficcing, rytt? its still amazingly cute. wuvvles you.
:D seeyah tomorrow.
Mouse
2008-04-30
ch 12, anon.
abuse*smile* cute
ABL
2008-03-15
ch 1,
abuse:) These are so sweet--brilliant idea.
M
2008-03-14
ch 1, anon.
abuseHeh. I'm not too fond of Hershey's chocolate either.
Sivaroobini Lupin-Black
2008-03-12
ch 12,
abuseLol, the last couple of lines made me laugh out loud! Wonderful, as always. I absolutely love these drabbles. And honestly, I don't think I could resist a shirtless Crowley. :D

~ Sivaroobini
Sawlt to Your Suger
2008-03-11
ch 12,
abuseim running out of adjective to describe these, i'm very slow today. uhh

how about

MARVELOUS?

aziraphale would say that. probably to crowley. yes, i certainly do love it. its better than you said it would be. hahaha

you- its called seduction. although i need to change it to an adjective.
me- how about seducing? or seduce? yeahh.
you- or seductive. seductive is an adjective.
me- oh right. i got adjective and verb mixed up. oh woww. oh woww *can't believe i just did that*

B A H A H A.
yeahh. lurrvs yah. you did a good job today with your speech too. and your WHTLG quote. favvziess.
Sawlt to Your Suger
2008-02-24
ch 11,
abuseah me loves me loves. keep up the good work, lotus!!
Surrender
2008-02-13
ch 10,
abuseStill so lovely! And I'm so happy to see some Anathema and Newt. They totally don't get enough love, and they're definetely one of my favorite literary couples.
Sawlt to Your Suger
2008-02-12
ch 10,
abuseheyy i think the "would" after "he worries that..." should be "will" but the other ones can stay i think. its just that would is past tense. hrrhmf.
BUT THIS ONE IS CUTE TOO.

and dammit its selfish kindness. just like you.
Sawlt to Your Suger
2008-02-12
ch 9,
abusecute. im still liking soft and symbolic more.

teehee.

YOU CHANGED IT SOMEWHERE! just like we talked aboot.
Sawlt to Your Suger
2008-02-11
ch 8,
abuseaww. cute.
im not sure what you mean by "his body isnt" because i have a sense that you mean his fashion sense.
Sawlt to Your Suger
2008-02-10
ch 7,
abusehahaha.
i just adore the plasterness of their first time. that was amazing. you know, i think perhaps you might write about the four horsemen (or three woman) because the restaurant scene is one of my favorite non-aziraphale/crowley bits of the book. anyway, you never cease to amaze me, dawling.
i promise ill finish that takusenri sos i can start a good omens. (although ive still got three angsty vamp knight fics to actually write out, thriving in my brain)

Sawlt to Your Suger
2008-02-10
ch 6,
abuseaw. these just keep getting better and better. nyeeh. i love how im going to do every single one of these. i think perhaps you should rename the whole fic something that starts with an S? perhaps "somethings" dunno. TELL ME WHEN YOU UPDATE DAWLING. ps: at first i was gonna tell you that these could be K but i see now why you decided to Trate it.
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