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| Lucki Ducki Kirbi 2008-05-16 ch 13, | abuse-gigglesnort- Aw, that was really cute. |
| Hoddmimirswoods 2008-05-16 ch 13, | abuseAw! This is probably my favorite drabble that you've written so far. The dialog is great and the idea is adorable. |
| Sawlt to Your Suger 2008-05-15 ch 13, | abuseooh. that one was cute. :D i like cats. not my fave, but you've been in need of some ficcing, rytt? its still amazingly cute. wuvvles you. :D seeyah tomorrow. |
| Mouse 2008-04-30 ch 12, anon. | abuse*smile* cute |
| ABL 2008-03-15 ch 1, | abuse:) These are so sweet--brilliant idea. |
| M 2008-03-14 ch 1, anon. | abuseHeh. I'm not too fond of Hershey's chocolate either. |
| Sivaroobini Lupin-Black 2008-03-12 ch 12, | abuseLol, the last couple of lines made me laugh out loud! Wonderful, as always. I absolutely love these drabbles. And honestly, I don't think I could resist a shirtless Crowley. :D ~ Sivaroobini |
| Sawlt to Your Suger 2008-03-11 ch 12, | abuseim running out of adjective to describe these, i'm very slow today. uhh how about MARVELOUS? aziraphale would say that. probably to crowley. yes, i certainly do love it. its better than you said it would be. hahaha you- its called seduction. although i need to change it to an adjective. me- how about seducing? or seduce? yeahh. you- or seductive. seductive is an adjective. me- oh right. i got adjective and verb mixed up. oh woww. oh woww *can't believe i just did that* B A H A H A. yeahh. lurrvs yah. you did a good job today with your speech too. and your WHTLG quote. favvziess. |
| Sawlt to Your Suger 2008-02-24 ch 11, | abuseah me loves me loves. keep up the good work, lotus!! |
| Surrender 2008-02-13 ch 10, | abuseStill so lovely! And I'm so happy to see some Anathema and Newt. They totally don't get enough love, and they're definetely one of my favorite literary couples. |
| Sawlt to Your Suger 2008-02-12 ch 10, | abuseheyy i think the "would" after "he worries that..." should be "will" but the other ones can stay i think. its just that would is past tense. hrrhmf. BUT THIS ONE IS CUTE TOO. and dammit its selfish kindness. just like you. |
| Sawlt to Your Suger 2008-02-12 ch 9, | abusecute. im still liking soft and symbolic more. teehee. YOU CHANGED IT SOMEWHERE! just like we talked aboot. |
| Sawlt to Your Suger 2008-02-11 ch 8, | abuseaww. cute. im not sure what you mean by "his body isnt" because i have a sense that you mean his fashion sense. |
| Sawlt to Your Suger 2008-02-10 ch 7, | abusehahaha. i just adore the plasterness of their first time. that was amazing. you know, i think perhaps you might write about the four horsemen (or three woman) because the restaurant scene is one of my favorite non-aziraphale/crowley bits of the book. anyway, you never cease to amaze me, dawling. i promise ill finish that takusenri sos i can start a good omens. (although ive still got three angsty vamp knight fics to actually write out, thriving in my brain) |
| Sawlt to Your Suger 2008-02-10 ch 6, | abuseaw. these just keep getting better and better. nyeeh. i love how im going to do every single one of these. i think perhaps you should rename the whole fic something that starts with an S? perhaps "somethings" dunno. TELL ME WHEN YOU UPDATE DAWLING. ps: at first i was gonna tell you that these could be K but i see now why you decided to Trate it. |