aw the ending was so sweet, i loved it!

omg thats so good. and yay for edo getting one up on roy for his last night! can't wait for the next chappie

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*huggles* ED TOPPED *_*
Ed should top more often >.> I loved these 2 chapters ^^ even if Roy was a bit of an ass in this one XD I look forward to the next one <3

YEY 5 STAGES!! C: :D

*vewy happy to beta, knows stuff, shethinks ^^*

At least they are on the same page.

the only thing that is wrong is that there is not more! *grins* roy is so whipped XDD

Oh the poor pancake batter, it must be feeling so lonely and abandoned. I don’t think there was too much “squish”, but mainly because you don’t let your story become over whelmed with the squishiness.
-Morana

Aha! It was the right arm slip up! Were you aiming for left arm? I would help beta for you if I wasn't going into the military on Oct 21st. See you next chapter!

FINALLY! Roy gives in. They can't get THAT far out of reach of each other... They're too cllose for that. hmph! I loved it when Havoc threatened to bed Roy and Roy almost accept it... ALMOst. ^^

I love that episode of House, by the way. Nice mix in of the five stages, too. It flowed nicely ^^. Keep it up!

*has a spazz attack* OMG whoa! okay..i have read your.."A Lot to Make Up For" twice ..and yeah this is my first time reading what you got so far of this story

..WHOA! this is so damn good..that..i didn't realize i hit the end of chapter 5!
Please update soon, cause this is seriously amazing.

*sigh* It is so sad to see them fight against each other because of external influences. Alas, it is closer to the truth for them and makes great drama for a story. See you next chapter!

Roy, you are such a fool.

god... fuzzy, check. warm, ... in the heart, check. The AC freezing my nose and right arm, check. newly received cookie, check.

LOVELY CHAPITRE!

Warm and fuzzy? No not at all. In desperate need of another chapter because this story is so very awesome and makes me all edge-of-my-seat-suspense jumpy? Yes. I want to know how (if) Roy survives and if Ed can at least make nice before they both leave on life threaten trips! (because Winry + wrench = as dangerous as the North)
-Morana