   SamusX10
2009-05-21 . chapter 1Beautiful ;)
I love the simplicity of the point, and the way Mustang stays in character the entire time. |
 Squiggles9034914
2008-12-07 . chapter 1AW! cute :3 |
 Billie the fourth sage
2008-09-22 . chapter 1LOL cute, sweet, short ^_^ |
 nukagirl
2008-09-04 . chapter 1This is cool |
 DarkLight's Pen
2008-04-04 . chapter 1A few spelling errors, but generally alright. I think I've had enough Yoai for one day though. |
 Lolligaggin
2008-01-24 . chapter 1Kyya!~ that was so cute! I loved it. I thought I was going to be mad because it was so short but you ended it with a bang I loved it I loved it I loved it! hahahah
Write more woman lol. |
 Momma Mustang
2008-01-23 . chapter 1That was very nicely written. Short and sweet. I loved that. |
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