 Rukia-IchiRuki 2009-09-29 . chapter 11Ah~ This chapter simply made me want to laugh and jump like a crazy reviewer with joy. =w=
Looks like I won't have to stalk you after all! |
 Rukia-IchiRuki 2009-09-29 . chapter 8Ohmaigawd, ohmaigawd, ohmaigawd. And no, I don't care that I just sounded like a teenaged-girl with gazillion crushes. >.>
This chapter's named "Reunion"! It can only mean one thing...(I think) ICHIRUKI! Wo-ho.
OHMAIGAWD, I HEART YOU!
=w=
...
Of course they will! ...
If not...
...
*twitches* |
 Rukia-IchiRuki 2009-09-29 . chapter 7Gah, I couldn't help it. When I read the name Renji...I just felt ugh, knowing perfectly well that you put a RenR-Ru...(I can't even say it) in here. But I must read, for something important will happen. >.>
NO RUKIA! NO! NO NO NO NO NO! I must sound SO insane right now, but...What else can you expect from me?
WOO-HOO, 5 MORE CHAPTERS!
Yeah, I'm kinda happy now.
Unless...You do something unexpected...*twitches* |
 Rukia-IchiRuki 2009-09-29 . chapter 6Renji? RENJI?!? WHAT THE HECK? WHAT. THE. HECK? THE HECK?!? Wow, I must sound like a broken record.
Okay, Okay, I can't rush reading, which is what I'm doing. I'm like so desperate to see Rukia & Ichigo finally meet. And hopefully, have Rukia remember.
WHAT DID YOU.
YOU!
YOU! GAH.
RENJI &...Ru..Ru?!??! YOU!
*slowly breathes*
Okay..Okay.
But when I finish and realize that it wasn't IchiRuki, I WILL FIND YOU! |
 Rukia-IchiRuki 2009-09-29 . chapter 5Renji, I swear that if you ever make a move on Rukia *cough* taking advantage you pineapple *cough*, I'll punch you like Ichigo did- only, 6x harder. And then, once Ichigo finds out...*evil glint in eyes* MWAHAHAHA!
Oh ha, I'm not tearing up!
I totally agree with Sentaro.
No. No. No.
Do NOT. Tear up.
*must. Not. tear. up...* >.>
Man, no one ever believes kids.
Yeah, Ichigo, you'll be so SORRY! MWHAHAHA. |
 Rukia-IchiRuki 2009-09-29 . chapter 4No! I teared up again when Orihime was telling Kaien about Rukia! Dang it, since when have I become so..SOFT?!? I blame you and your writing skills!
Yeah well, Orihime, Kaien's actually right! HA!
I swear that I will NOT go to sleep until I finish reading this! |
 Rukia-IchiRuki 2009-09-29 . chapter 3Dude, seriously, you are just...>.>
I just finished reading Worth the Risk and I'm STILL tearing up a bit. Good thing I'm not listening to any sad songs. It just kinda makes me sad that Rukia doesn't know anything really...Ichigo, her son...You know? And Ichigo's here, still mourning over her death. It's just really...Sad to have the two separated from each other, only Rukia's actually alive, but Ichigo doesn't know. What I'm saying is that...Worth the Risk was definitely worth reading. And I'm definitely glad that you made a sequel. I must sound so cheesy. >.> But your trilogy (I think that's what it's called) is amazing. Now, I should stop blabbering like a fool and continue reading. xD
Rukia's a fighter, ain't she? The fact that she's still alive after THAT happened, I mean.
But, Baka-Byakuya-sama! Ichigo MUST know! He LOVES her, Baka-Byakuya-sama. =.=
Rukia, he's your..Er, boyfriend/supposed-to-be-husband? ._.
Renji you liar~
Man, do you seriously have to make me be in love with your stories?! |
 agent sabog 2009-08-20 . chapter 12 A good family story, and i really like seeing Renji being the catalyst to Ichigo ang Rukia's tearfull but heartfull reunion there, but I think this story focuses on Renji's guilt and inners struggles for over half the story there, you have redeemed yourself from other fan critics from your previous story. |
 Kiba Wolf 2009-08-20 . chapter 12Well time for the final review of this amazing trilogy.
First and foremost, as always, congratulations on completing this story!
Originally I had thought that I'd like this story more than your previous sequel (Worth the Risk), but I can't honestly say I did.
The anticipation and thrill I got from reading this story trumped WtR by far, but if I look at from more of a 'plot' point of view, I can't say I'm as happy this time around. That's odd, considering I loved the idea of amnesia and Ichigo and Rukia finding their way back together. That being said, I suppose I just felt like this could have been better, but wasn't, in some ways. I'm not saying I could've done it better myself by any means; I just think that good things should stop while they're ahead. With this story, it felt like I was waiting for something to happen that never really happened, and chapter after chapter was just stretching the story out. Oddly enough, though, I felt closure by time the epilogue wrapped up. Once again, I think it was a matter of the potential and what actually came of it.
So I guess that’s my soapbox for this lovely trilogy.
Now on with what you actually want to hear: I loved this story. Despite all the uncertainty I felt while reading it, in the end I don’t regret my decision to stick with it. There were a good handful of mistakes scattered through out (small things: skipping words, wrong endings, etc.), but your writing just utterly overshadows that. You have such an unique voice when it comes to your writing, and you manage (for the most part) to write the characters so that they still feel like the characters we, as Bleach fans, fell in love with. You’ve managed to start with a one-shot and end up with a multi-chapter story trilogy, all while keeping the story fresh and exciting. The most important part of this story, I feel, is that you kept us entertained. I’ve glanced over some of the reviews you got, especially the ones from the last chapter of WtR, and despite the death threats, you still manage to keep a strong following. Treasure that and treasure the fact that you have a gift when it comes to writing. Hey, if you read over everything, patched up a few mistakes, then I don’t think there would be anything technically wrong with anything you’ve written. I certainly don’t think there’s anything wrong artistically with how you write. Keep writing and keep up the good work.
Thank you for publishing this fiction! |
 Kiba Wolf 2009-08-20 . chapter 11The bit with the Thirteenth division was funny, in a way. Ichigo bugging the tar outta Byakuya was a fan wish, haha.
But aside from that, there was a really serious note to the chapter too. It's nice to feel like things are reaching a serious conclusion, but at the same time...
I'm kind of left wondering how you took care of the epilouge. |
 Kiba Wolf 2009-08-20 . chapter 10It was just so...
too...
Yeah you were right last chapter saying this one was emotional. I can't even find the words for it right now. Just...
Darn good job. Thank you. |
 Kiba Wolf 2009-08-20 . chapter 9Emotional rollercoasters can be fun, depending, just to comment on the author's note really fast.
Well, well, well.
Hmm.
Nice to see that, although she's forgotten, she's still, well, herself. So much ground left to be covered though... at least that's what it feels like. Then again, you've surprised me before so I guess it's up to the next chapter. |
 Kiba Wolf 2009-08-20 . chapter 8...
Hm...
I don't really know what to say about this one. It was exciting, in a way, for sure, but beyond that...
Phew, hard to judge right now; I'll wait for the next chapter. |
 Kiba Wolf 2009-08-20 . chapter 7Yup, that instinct to murder Renji is back.
Blugh, didn't care for this chapter so much in pairings, but it was still a good chapter. Most importantly, it made progress.
I kind of like how Rangiku is just popping up and helping, well really, Ichigo and Rukia. Obviously she has her own motives, but still. |
 Kiba Wolf 2009-08-20 . chapter 6I'll admit, this wasn't exactly what I was expecting. I figured Renji would have a part to play in bringing Ichigo and Rukia back together, but not like this. I had expected for all of them to kind of find out together, if that makes any sense. Well at least I hate Renja a little less this chapter; too bad next chapter's probably gonna smash that all over again. |
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