You wrote it so amazingly beautiful, that I was crying at the end. You explained so much of the love between Gast and Ifalna. Bravo!

I've got to say, you did very well in putting emotion into this story. I could literally feel Ifalna's pain when Gast dies.

I think you should try different styles of writing. You certainly nailed this one.

Wow, this was a great fanfic. I'm not sure if I ever read a fanfic before that tried to explain the Gast and Ifalna story. Thought you did great with it.

Only thing I would say is that while reading the fanfic. I would have thought this fanfic would be bigger (I read the description wrong, and because I thought that is where the flow of the story was going.). I thought Cloud was going to do something with this knowledge. Explain why Aeris obviously had him find the diary. But other than that, I thought it was a great story, great job!

*sniffle* Very, very powerfully written. I'm really and truly tearing up. You did this idea so well and so perfectly, filling in one of the many holes in the FFVII story. I didn't think it was possible to hate Hojo more, but you just proved me wrong, lol. The emotion was very deep and effective, and I just love it so much. I also love the Clerith in it, of course. ^_^ Lots of Clerith cookies for you! *presents a freshly baked batch*