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| Tesina Gela Gardner 2008-07-30 ch 5, | abusei. must. find. out. what. happens. next! xD |
| Aki 2008-06-20 ch 5, anon. | abusenot a south park fan but strangely, I want to see more. @_@ and whats with the camera? |
| RockerRema13 2008-06-07 ch 5, | abuseOh my, this is exciting! Especially love how Damien got possessive. Do go on with the story. :] |
| Anonymous Void 2008-06-02 ch 5, | abuseSo we meet again. You've captured my attention once again and I would like to see another installment of this fic. |
| Lady Azura 2008-05-11 ch 5, | abuseCongratulations, you've officially made me a Damien/Kyle fan. I really like this fic so far, so update soon! :) |
| TheyKilledKenny 2008-04-04 ch 5, anon. | abuse*shudder* Damien's freaky. Kyle should ditch him, he'll just get in trouble. |
| Kura-sama 2008-03-27 ch 5, | abuseVery interesting ... I am suspicious about the camera ... it is definitely not a normal camera. I wonder if there's any side-effects from having pictures taken by it? Can't wait till more ~ this is so intense XD Love Damien's character. |
| Keehl-River 2008-03-20 ch 5, | abuseo. What happened that made him so tired? |
| FlappyGal 2008-03-18 ch 5, | abuseI'm so glad I found your story, I added it to my favorites :D and despite what everyone else seems to think, I like the format you have going here, it fits the style of the story very well and I don't think blocked paragraphs would make the reading more pleasurable at all. At any rate, love your story, please update soon |
| silent 2008-03-16 ch 5, anon. | abuseaww. i wish it were longer, or at least the next chapter comes sooner. keep going! |
| Bohobella 2008-03-14 ch 5, anon. | abuseI love your wacky pairings, as I find Damien with ANYONE is good! I'm far too tired to be at at helpful in this review, so I'll just leave this as a plea for a quick update! :P |
| Laniatus 2008-03-14 ch 5, | abuseflameflameflameflameflameflameflame--nr. XD Um...what to say what to say what to say... Good chapter? Yeah, that's a start...huh... 8D;; I liked it, a lot, as always. ...maybe your paragraphs should be a bit more blocky? Other than that I can't really think of anything even semi-wrong with it. Anyway, I can't think of anything else to put in this review...so bye bye. |
| ailea 2008-03-13 ch 5, | abuseI love how you used the metaphor "like riding a roller coaster with broken tracks" to compare to Damian's kisses. It sounds so frightening yet exhilarating, just how I imagined it in my head. The writing is good, but I think you should add more block paragraphs, because the one-liners seem to fly by too quickly. Can't wait for the next chapter! ^^ - ailea |
| story 2008-02-28 ch 4, anon. | abuseyay! some action. i like it cuz both damien and cartman want kyle, but kyle is blissfully unaware of this... seriously cant wait for more. (even if its a little unwanted action, thats ok too, im bad) |
| Laniatus 2008-02-25 ch 4, | abusekehafkjdhga KJDGKDSF. You have made me so happy. Thank you. So much. Poor Damien. He wuvs his Kyle. 8D;; I have no concrit this time. Just praise. Mostly because I'm nervous as heck for the spelling bee tomorrow...but yeah. Cartman's awesome. Kenny's awesomer. (My science teacher uses that words, so muahahahaha.) ...lalala I'll just be going now. 8D Bai-bai. |