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drgemini86 2008-03-18 ch 20,	abuseYay! Update! Wow, the games these people play are stupid as well as dangerous. I thought Rihanna was going to have knee Mark then lol Great work, : )
Beth-TauriChick 2008-03-08 ch 19,	abuseHiya! First off, let me apologize for being MIA for awhile on here- it's been a crazy last few weeks :) Anyway, I had several wonderful chapters to catch up on, so yay for that! I absolutely loved Jack's remark to Daniel about how just because he liked him it didn't mean he wouldn't kill him if he hurt Sam- that's so Jack! And chapter 19 is quite the cliff-hanger, so I'm very eagerly awaiting chapter 20 :)
drgemini86 2008-02-21 ch 19,	abuseOoh, developments. Hey, is it Martouf? Very, especially well written chapter. Brilliant. Great work - keep it up. I wonder if Anise has PMT lol : )
Entropic Cascade 2008-02-18 ch 18,	abuseThis is a great story! I loved the last chapter 'Busted'..I'm a sucker for Sam & Daniel too! Keep up the good work...plus you have to make it up to us now - I thought I was getting three chapters tonight, but I only got two and some author's notes (as great as they were, they didn't satisfy my desire for some more conspiracy! LOL!)
drgemini86 2008-02-18 ch 18,	abuseYou're welcome - this is a great story - I can only see this getting better. Well done. lol cake is good. There was more all rounded action and plots with the original team. Ooh, I wonder who you bring back... Jacob's reaction to Sam & Daniel would be interesting although Martouf could be more crucial to the plot as well as being a link to Sam's past. Keep up the good work! : )
drgemini86 2008-02-18 ch 17,	abuseLol Oh Jack's always been far cleverer than he lets on. Love the last warning... it's also nice to know that Jack is not afraid to admit that he likes Daniel, as opposed to that awkward admittance in Meridian. Also loved Sam's reaction to seeing Daniel half naked...I'm not sure how she even managed to speak coherently lol Great work, Sam & Daniel as a married couple... that is going to be so fun, especially if they go to the same lengths as Paul & Ri. : )
drgemini86 2008-02-18 ch 16,	abuseHm, the Baal clones arc didn't happen until season 9 or 10 but this is much better because Jack's still in charge of the team. Oh yeah, Paul & Ri are in mega trouble. It's nice to see Jack more accustomed to dealing with the Tok'ra - it lets the story carry on smoothly. Nice work, : )
drgemini86 2008-02-17 ch 15,	abuseOoh, they want to be watching out. It looks like some crazy cult. Also, Amber could be working for the bad guys in a good cop-bad cop way. Hope they're going to be ok - esp. Rihanna. Great chapter - keep up the good work. : )
drgemini86 2008-02-13 ch 14,	abuseGreat work! Love how much Paul lies - it seems to make the difference with regard to whether he's accepted. Great job! : )
drgemini86 2008-02-12 ch 13,	abuseNah, it's ok... thought I'd give you the heads up though... smile I'm already going with "AU future". Wow, nosey neighbour... she had her eyes everywhere, didn't she... snicker the clothes on the floor made me chuckle - it really adds some authenticity to their cover stories though I love how Paul and Rihanna are so comfortable around each other... it's cute and endearing. Hm, I wonder if we get to see those wee gizmos in action. Brilliant work! : )
drgemini86 2008-02-12 ch 12,	abuseWow, this story is amazing! You've kept me hooked from chapter to chapter... loved the developments in this one. Paul's such a cute waker, mentally, just like Daniel. lol Hm, nice touch with the ancient legends. In reality, the current inhabitants of Egypt are mostly, if not all Arab thanks to the Muslim conquests of the region. Pretty good going to have another Daniel around, so to speak, if it's not safe for them to go to our boy. Great work! : )
Beth-TauriChick 2008-02-12 ch 13,	abuseLOL, that's right, Paul, women can multitask :) Two great chapters, nice to see Teal'c put in an appearance, too! Keep up the great work :)
drgemini86 2008-02-12 ch 11,	abuseOoh, fantastic. Very well written. I just have a teeny wee thing to point out - Rihanna must be one young Captain if she was a kid when her Dad told her those stories... or he must've told her them quite late. The Stargate wasn't opened 'til about 1996 in the show's timeline... & I'm guessing this is about season 8, which puts the year to about 2004. Considering that she'd have graduated from the USAF Academy in 4 years, making her a Lieutenant when she came out (the minimum age of entry is 17), she can't have been exceptionally young especially considering her current assignment. Anywho, great work yet again... keep it up! : )
drgemini86 2008-02-12 ch 10,	abuseWonderful chapter... It's really great that they had that talk to air what has not quite so obviously been simmering between them for a long time. g Great work! : )
Beth-TauriChick 2008-02-11 ch 11,	abuseHappy sigh Lovely chapters (I had 3 to read this afternoon- yay!). Sam and Daniel were just, well, perfect :) Really enjoyed Paul & Rihanna, too. I suppose it'll be on to more plot next chapter, but that's ok, because you write fluff and substance equally wonderfully :)

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