 sparklebluelemon 2009-08-04 . chapter 20Great story, can't wait for next chapter! |
 BonitaChickia 2009-06-18 . chapter 20well well now Richard is back things are going to get a lot more interesting...how is Xavier going to act now that Richard is back for good, and i wonder if Barbra knows that Richard is now at her school. I am so excited that Victor is finally introduced into the story i love him lol awesome job my friend and update soon :-D |
 Isabella2601 2009-06-17 . chapter 20Congrats on the new boyfriend by the way :) |
 cartoonfire 2009-06-17 . chapter 20Kory, no, NO! Don't you see, you're falling into his trap! He's just trying to get you into bed, don't listen to him! He's the devil! He's like my principal and my math teacher all mixed into one! He's a bad apple! Bad apple I say! Like the one Snow White took a bite of. DON'T TRUST HIM!
sigh
Well, now that my little rant is over with... great job on the chapter! I've been wondering and waiting for this.
Anyways, Richard, go burn in hell! I hope crows pick at your eye balls and you die!
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Lovely chapter, just lovely :) |
 Hinata1020569 2009-06-17 . chapter 20Very cool chapter!Can't wait to see the next one! |
 animeaddict2323232 2009-06-17 . chapter 20Nah! I'm not mad at ya. I was so ectastic when I saw their was an update! I actually leaped for joy, fell out of my chair, hit my head on the desk, earning a large bump on my head! BUT IT WAS ALL WORTH IT!
That was really cute between Kory and Richard.I'm glad Kory's feelings for him never left even though he broke her heart and is trying to make up for it.
I hope Gar comes back and that Xavier is CAUGHT doing something bad. Maybe Kory's new roomate will help with that. Rachel needs to have a girl talk with Kory!
I cannot wait for the next chapter to see what you will do with Kory and Richard! They are the cutest together so yeah I'm gonna go take the poll now but anyway I enjoyed the chappy!
-Anime- |
 BonitaChickia 2009-05-10 . chapter 19aw i love that this chapter was mostly about Rae and Gar! the story was soo cute and sad at the same time...Gar needs to get his act together and go back to Rae before Garth sneaks in and takes his girl! awesome job and update soon :-D |
 cartoonfire 2009-05-10 . chapter 19If you're trying to make me hate Xavier... well... dammit you did a good job! But I'll give him another chance, mainly because he was high, but most of all because I don't want Kory to end up Richard. He I find disgusting, more so than Johnny and Kitten... Well my little rant is over, here's something I bet you wanna hear: THIS CHAPTER IS AWESOME!
And I really mean that. Even though I dislike it, I enjoyed seeing this side of Xavier, because now I know that Kory deserves better, so I can't wait until she finds someone worthy. And the flashback was fantastic!
I can't wait for the next chapter, but take all the time you need to update cos I understand life can get in the way, my friend, boy howdy is life pissing her off right now, lol, anyways I'm being to rant again SO...
Awesome chappie, and update as soon as you can ;) |
 chicagobabe 2009-05-09 . chapter 19awwh
poor garfield i feel sorry him
hm oh i was reading on of ur stories on fictionpress no objections its good actully all ur stories are good on fanfiction and press i would have revwed but dont have an account and that im not really a good writer bahh sorry for the long reveiw i just wanted to say yay u updated cant wait for next chapter and dont give up on ur other stories on fictionpress they are good they are worth reading :D |
 Hinata1020569 2009-05-09 . chapter 19Please write more soon!Very cool chap. |
 BeastBoyzWifey007 2009-04-27 . chapter 18 OMG...THIS HAS GOTTEN SO GOOD GURL. My computer finally like died all the way so now i have to go up 2 the library and use their computers to read all the goodies. Im kinda in a rush but I promise i'll review the rest and keep up from there.
Lotz Ov Love,
Beast Boys Wifey |
 cartoonfire 2009-04-16 . chapter 18I am a bad reviewer! I read the chapter like a week ago, but I didn't review, and I kept saying to myself I'll come back to it later, but I never did and I'm SORRY! Please forgive me, you know I love your story! (cries)
Okay, enough of that, let me tell you what I loved about this chapter. I loved the Xavier/Kory moment. It was so sweet! I loved how she was trying to get him up but he wouldn't budge and how he trapped her under him. It was so adorable.
And I love how Xavier always sticks up for Kory. You would never see Richard do that, dirty little skank that he is.
Anyways, Xavier is awesome! Him and Kory make an awesome couple! And this chapter is awesome!
AWESOME!
lol |
 mythica magic 2009-03-28 . chapter 18no Xavior dont do it! hehehe o well its his life, poor koris going to be crushed when she finds out though, god cant she get just 1 decient boyfriend?! and what is richard upto...hm
Great chapter! please update soon i cant wait to read the rest!x |
 chicagobabe 2009-03-25 . chapter 18shheesh jonnay
lol cant wait till next chap :D |
 chicagobabe 2009-03-25 . chapter 17awh
how cutee |