Very Poetic.

I loved the line "To keep a cold heart ever frozen." It gave me the chills.

I really love the symbolism you put to ice, and I like the way you made it short, but good!

:3

~Bishimimou

I loved this! ^^

I felt so identificated whit this situation, cause I love to eat ice too (every time I get to the bottom of the glass I eat all the ice even if I want to refill the glass, so I have to put ice on it over and over again XD) and I always thought it had something to do with a cold personality, now I'll remember of this fic every time I eat ice ^^

Anyways, great work, good concept, keep it up! :D

hmm...i like it, but your right it is sad.
im a big soi fong+yoruichi fan though, and enjoy anything with the two of them^_^ nice work

I liked the ice thing.
Its pretty neat.
:)

aww... This is interesting... they're both hurtin' on the inside, and I bet if they collaborated, they would be able to get together and be happy...

I always thought ice was gosh darn sexy.

(I guess you just need ice to cool off while thinking about your hot crush, ne? ;) ... (I know how that goes... good luck, do your best, and HAVE FUN with it; that's all the advice I'm qualified to give -_- ...)

Mwuahahaha...? lol I feel evil for reviewing a one-shot twice, hehehe... Anyway, i think it's funny that u eat ice whenever u think of ur crush. xD VERY funny, ha ha. I really like how u "stated" not wanting flames too. XD Now, the fic... The idea with ice was very good. ^_^ Nice job for a short one-shot Emo Person-hope to hear more from u (ahem, 1001 Nights, ahem!!) XP

So, im not logging in since im in school, ha ha. XD Imma finish reading this fic of urs when i get home-looks pretty good from what ive read so far! ^_^ And u gotta update 1001 Nights sometime soon, kay?

...im gonna review again when i get home! Mwuhahahaha!