Interesting, I wonder what the Doctor is going to do now. Glad he escaped though. Getting more interesting every chapter, looking forward to the next one!

R.R.

oh my wonder what will they do to rose now that the doctor escaped
maria

Awesome story. Really really really really really good. it is well written and really good story plot/line. please update as soon as you can because I can't wait for more

OMG I have cried almost all of the way though so far. So sad but brilliantly written well done...please continue!

OMG you updated this! And it's still amazing! YES. Thanks so much!

verry good chapter i hope you can update soon i want to know what happens thanks

Hi, I was just wondering when you were going to finish this story

I got to say I love the story and hope you update soon.

What can I say but - Oh... My... God!

What a fantastic story!! I have just read all of the 28 chapters in one sitting with no breaks - I was that gripped!! Even my boyfriend trying to talk to me, and then later on him leaving for work couldn't tear me away!

The one thing I can say that I am disappointed about is that you haven't updated since 2008, and I really, REALLY hope that you do continue with this as I am desperate to know what happens.

PLEASE don't leave me hanging like this forever!

great story. hopefully i will get to see more

I have to say, this is a very compelling story. I found it a real effort to make this story last, as I couldn't help but think 'Oh go on, one more chapter.' I like that in a story. So that's a positive point right from the off.

On the whole, I like what I've seen so far for the most part. I think the plot is quite strong, and I like how it has developed. Rose's development has been particuarly interesting, and while I was sceptical about how she could become a pure blooded killing machine at first, but it was well explained and her healing was very well done.

In recent chapters, you've got me quite interested as to what the Kajoran agenda is. Clearly, it's not as clear cut as if first appeared, but you're certainly keeping us hanging on to find out. I also like how you've captured the mentality of an opressed society and the victorious conquerors, or the 'us and them mentality' as I call it. It strikes me as very close to realism, particularly the wild recklessness of the mob yu described in the mines.

But, and there are a few buts, I can't help but feel you could do more. Some of your chapters seem pretty dialogue driven and others seem to meander without much real point in places. In my opinion, more description is needed, just to get more immersion going.

I also can't help but think that the speech patterns of the main characters are a bit off in places. Now, this is just a personal thing, but I find it difficult to envisage the Doctor swearing, even after what the Kajorans did to Rose. There were other instances, I think, but they were only minor, and not particularly worth worrying about or mentioning.

And that's about it. Despite those points, I enjoy this story very much and I can't wait to see a new update. Good luck.

Uh-oh, not good. The Doctor better think of something quick, not only because of being captured, but can you imagine what Jack would do left to his own devices on the TARDIS with a bunch of newly freed slaves?

R.R.

wow! i love this story and it keeps getting better!
can't wait till next chapter

This is such a gripping read! I havent seen a story like this before and i cannot wait to see how things will work out and what other trial that they will have to go through. I look forward to the next installment.

Eek!

Next chappie pwease?

I wanna know what happens to Jackey.

*pouts*