 InfinityOnTheRun 2009-07-05 . chapter 4I like this mature side of Edward :) |
 MARYLOVER 2008-10-17 . chapter 4Still waiting for the epiligue.
I liked the ending, oddly strange... but this is your work, what else should I expect?
I loved the part when both scarred skins rubbed against each other... everything seems alright and correct, their demons may be not the same, but demons still... and Ed not hearing them the moment he's with Roy... a thought so powerful... I don't know if people noticed that. Hearing nothing at all after all that hollow noise day by day, night by night...
You made an implied sex scene not be considered erotic but just relief.
But I can't finish my review to the whole fic becase there-is-NO-epilogue-yet!
Good job. |
 merlyn1382 2008-08-11 . chapter 4its sad to say but they needed eachother more then either of them knew |
 s909 2008-08-10 . chapter 4I'm glad it didn't die and has an ending. It's terrible when that happens. |
 MithLuin 2008-08-10 . chapter 4I'm glad you didn't abandon this. I'm still confused about a few things, but hopefully the epilogue will clear that up. |
 Bar-Ohki 2008-08-07 . chapter 4They'll find their happiness. Eventually. |
 GreedxEd 2008-08-05 . chapter 4well, they are more or less a couple through now right? they each went through silimar experinces so they need each other |
 LichenMage 2008-07-07 . chapter 3Oh my! At least Roy's not still wallowing in depression. And what'll happen when he has to face Edward? And I can't wait for Roy to learn that Edward saved him, not Riza! Please! More! *sends puppy-eyed look at author* |
 Cruel Angel's Love 2008-07-02 . chapter 3I'm not sure if you've said something on your profile about discontinuing this story, but I just thought I'd say that I love it. And I wished you'd continue it. |
 GreedxEd 2008-07-01 . chapter 3now you have to update this one! and is it roy/ed as in that pairing in the end? (hopefully...)and hopefully marie will not hate roy anymore. |
 Kitsune Tanaka 2008-06-29 . chapter 3Ah, Maria Ross, maker of the patented Verbal Bitchsmack Back to Earth. Beautiful |
 Kitsune Tanaka 2008-06-29 . chapter 1Holy shit, all those years of french finally paid off. |
 Suzuku90 2008-04-01 . chapter 3Only one more chapter?! That's cruel... so cruel...
Still interested in reading it, though. Hope to see an update soon! |
 Bar-Ohki 2008-03-31 . chapter 3It is now I bet Mustang pieces together who the handsome boy was. |
 ehxhfdl14 2008-03-31 . chapter 3Roy isn't as a bad man like Ross thinks, really- she just knows one side of the story is all. Loved her rant though.
You thought that the chapter was being difficult, but it works, you know :3 |