A wonderful portrayal of Brandon's character. Well done.

- Bara

Very nice. Quiet, intense, a little awkward when it comes to etiquette, just like Brandon. The last sentence really rounded it off.

This sounds like a beginning of a great story. I advice to you would be to add more.

Sons of Jenova (yazoo)

N'aw! That was cute. Brandon's such a sweet and sensitive guy. :D