I do like reading stories about young Snape. The only problem I can see, which is why you're not recieving the reviews, is that you have not put the disclaimer AU (Alternate Universe) in your plot summary. I don't know if you've read Deathly Hallows yet, so I don't want to give anything away, but this story is definately AU. Also, I don't know how you're uploading the story, but your spells need to be in italics. If you don't know how to do that, PM me and I will walk you through it. Good first effort. I look forward to more.

Solid chapter. I liked the bit between Severus and the girl when he helped her.

Fun start. I'm sorry you haven't gotten any reviews yet. Its like that with your first story. I'm off to read the next chapter.