You're awesome writer I must say, I just love your storytelling ^^
And back to the story, it was quite amazing :D The end was so cute _<

Nice story! Feels like everything's going quite fast between those two, though it feels like that's the point. I like the story line, and also the way you write and describe the personalities of the characters. I also like your Author's Note, guess it's because of the 'Other Junk' thingy. I usually take a liking to that kind of stuff.
Sorry for not being capable of making a great review, I'm quite tired, so I don't even know exactly what I'm writing..

Well, great work!

I love it, I love it... where'd the sea salt ice cream go?

Great fic. I loved reading it! So keep writing!

whoa...hayner's an asshole

brownie points and cookies...yum woot! earthquake! ... i need some coffee...

Omigosh! *squee* *glomps author*

all ryt cracker jacks!

Woo-Hoo! lol roxas at a rave

Ah, great story. Yes, I'm giving this story some love!

Awesome on top of fantastic mixed in with beast and a dollop of squee. You even gave me an epilogue, I love you so much. It's so sweet, and lovely, and fluffy, and yummy. You are a fantastic writer, great characterization, AWESOME sense of voice, great diction, great pacing, super everything. THANKYOU!

AH! You just make me wanna respond to these, they're great! You have such a great voice, clear, consistent, and creative.

I can't help it, I must review now! It's so sweet! I love it! The characterization, the witty banter. There wasn't anything even anything obviously funny about the situation, but when I read about Roxas replying "He locked our bikes together" so calmly, I could see it, the whole scene, and I literally laughed out loud. You have a great style, it's been so long since I read something this good, and I'm only on chapter 3! I AM EXCITED!! Thank you!!

THIS STROY IS FUCKING AWESOME! OMG that was one of the best iv evr read!

*squee*! just finished this at almost 3 in the morning so there really isn't much to say except that i couldn't stop reading it, and that it was completely awesome! :)

So, well, I'll type my whole long and drawn-out review at the end of the chapters you already have... But, I just felt obligated to answer your question about the reviews being high on chapter 4. It's gotta have something to do with the line, "You have a camel? That's fucking awesome.", because that line is purely epic. :D