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| Karsten69 2008-09-30 ch 1,  | abuse...Wow you're not begging for reviews. *thumbs up* that is good. good story too. |
| n1s 2008-07-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseLoved it! The air of cute knows no sweeter form than an interesting day with a lovely ending. Oh, and Tsukasa and Kagamin's shared knowledge at the end of the story. One of those laughs one is infected by when watching such a relate.able sit-com style anime . isn't really, originating from a 4-coma, but you know that type of smile/laugh. Priceless, for one seems to feel the need to be thankful for such literature. My praise may be a little over the top, i admit i get carried away, but . i can't deny your short stories/this series is a smile to my day, and inspires those creative juices. however chemical that metaphor may seem. D: /ramble. |
| weluvgirlswithglasses 2008-04-22 ch 1, | abuseI think I like this one better than its predecessor. But that might be because I just liked the heightened flirting better. Your writing is cute, in-character and funny as usual. Konata is appropriately a tease, and I loved the Haruhi reference. Kagami is appropriately stiff and flustered as well. And I really like how you've ended each story with an embarassing moment for each of them. ...do you know if the Marimite novels are in English? |
| Sylvaene 2008-04-16 ch 1, | abuseThis is actually pretty cute! Well, yes, college in Japan starts at the same time as high school. I've always maintained that Konata and Kagami have something going... why I never managed to make it happen in fanfiction eludes me. Haha. ^_^ I'd say that the Gigantea girls of Marimite were the most normal, actually. Shimako more than Noriko, I think. ^_^ Lack of sleep I think is good for you. Keep it up. ^_^ |
| Sakura cc 2008-03-31 ch 1, | abuseXD nice sequel! I've never watched Marimite n i am planning to... though the few things i know is that SEI is indeed my favorite character XD damn those fanfictions ^__^ I liked this very much! and it made me wan to have a water fight ~_~ hate u sun! HATE U JA NE |
| Saharet 2008-03-30 ch 1, | abuseHa! ha! ha! I bet Tsukasa is going to have nightmares for the rest of her life! XD A good read indeed, more L*S fics are always welcome... *wink* *wink* |
| Nuriko Hime-sama XDV 2008-02-11 ch 1, | abuseHurry up with the update. I can't wait for more! Also u can try & include some elements from Galaxy Angel Rune, Fate/Stay Night & Gundam 2gether. I'll be waiting. |
| lonelygurl123 2008-01-24 ch 1, | abuseNice story! It was a very good read. I enjoyed it very much! Thank you! I hope you make more, how about a sequal? Maybe...if you want...could you, make it a few chapters longer? I'll be bored as hell on the weekend, so could you please?? |
| crazyhorse08 2008-01-24 ch 1, | abuseCute. Haha I loved how you used the FMP titles for water attacks. Poor Tsukasa walking into them. Good job! |